So happy to see 2 new chapters. Poor Heath, could there be anything worse than just waiting, feeling helpless and unhappy, not knowing if there will be anything to even wait FOR! And, poor Jake too, being in some situation where he cannot go for something good in his life. Very powerful and empathetic writing, to evoke a reader's keen interest in what the future holds - can't wait for more! Emjay.
this is so well written, one just wants to go on and see what happens, see what both make of this mess they have been put in... really great read thank you again!
how sad is this: to want to tell the one you have feelings for that you want him, yet not daring to out of fear of rejection ?! I totally understand Heath, it's so frustrating !! I hope he does something about it... I would totally blurt it all to Jake, at least he would know. I hope none of Heath's fears happened and Jake is just late, or caught up in his other business !
thank you, Jane, wonderful chapters, such beautiful writing !!!
It is so hard to see the person you want to be with, leaving you without a word. And I am sure Jake is also afraid to be near Heath because that opens a place in his heart that he does not want to open. Thank you so much for sharing. Martha
Ditto from me, too. I so want to have them together - no secrets, no holding back. Just to have them together. Perhaps both of them are "afraid"; I think so. Just so great to see the names Heath and Jake together again. Love this story.
God, this story is so good! The new chapters have so smoothly continued from the re-worked ones. I know this will have a happy ending but the journey to the destination is filled with anxiousness. The uncertainty of where the relationship is going is strong in both men. The internal struggle each is going through as they try to understand what is happening to them is palpable. A word used in a comment above,yearning, is a perfect description. Heath's may be stronger than Jake's right now but knowing how they are being pulled towards each other sends shivers through my body. Your understanding of undeniable attraction has always been extraordinary. Thank you for sharing your amazing gift.
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Very powerful and empathetic writing, to evoke a reader's keen interest in what the future holds - can't wait for more! Emjay.
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really great read thank you again!
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I hope none of Heath's fears happened and Jake is just late, or caught up in his other business !
thank you, Jane, wonderful chapters, such beautiful writing !!!
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Just so great to see the names Heath and Jake together again.
Love this story.
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