Somewhere With You, Chapter Nine, Take Two

Mar 24, 2014 01:22

Somewhere With You, Chapter Nine, Take Two

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whiskiegurl March 24 2014, 18:55:45 UTC
i can't even remember the other one. i've got to refer back. my inspiration for the Other Guy is Matt Bomer. i used him with Jensen in the J2 vs. of the story. (i think)

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sienata March 25 2014, 12:39:26 UTC
White Collar. He's beautiful!!! In Heaths words to Jake in a future ch, "he's hot like you, just older & more metro sexual."

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janettexx March 24 2014, 22:09:45 UTC
Besides the name being the same you described Matt Bomer perfectly, he's the second person I Pictured in my head before I read you reply to PJ, The first being Jared Leto with shorter slightly darker hair, but then a light bulb came on and Matt popped into my head (what a vision!) and it all seemed to fit.

I'm loving this story more and more, The way you describe Heath trying to convince himself he doesn't have feelings for Jake is so funny! I especially love the part where He leaves the bar before he starts drawing hearts with their initials on bar napkins, hysterical!! anyways can we have more chapters soon please? thanks for the update. Janette.

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whiskiegurl March 25 2014, 00:05:49 UTC
i love Matt B!!! he's such a hottie boy!! and maybe if Heath wasn't already in way over his head with Jake, he'd think so too, but he's already taken, or so it seems!

thanks for reading. i'll probably post another ch or two on weds or thurs. i'm happy to report that i've got one brand new chapter written and i'm halfway through another one. i'm feeling good about this story now. yayayay!!

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grlewis March 24 2014, 22:44:58 UTC
this is just plain sad. while l liked heath's visit to miami,his hook up with matt is just wrong. too bad heath couldn't hook up with jake. heath needs to hook up with jake and jake needs to start feeling something for heath, even though he knows better.

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whiskiegurl March 25 2014, 00:05:35 UTC
yes, i know. they are having not the easiest time of it. i'm typing away on their next encounter right now, tho, so don't despair. they'll get another chance. :)

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ramona4jake March 25 2014, 00:37:59 UTC
aw, damn !.... that was such..... shikes, don't know what to say besides that Heath is really lost ! he needs Jake as much as Jake needs him, but neither knows it.... yet ! ;o) in any other combination, I would say Heath has poor judgement - refusing Matt ??! but against Jake....

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whiskiegurl March 29 2014, 02:35:54 UTC
yes, MB would be hard to walk away from. heath is in a bad spot and he knows it. now what to do???

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tizi17 March 25 2014, 09:01:51 UTC
i remember that chapter from take one, and i remember wondering where this was going to...
i like it a lot!

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whiskiegurl March 29 2014, 02:37:36 UTC
i'm glad you're enjoying the story. i'm wrapping up chapter seventeen. yayayay for progress. and you'll be glad to know that you aren't the only one who's wondering where this is going. they are too! :)

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