Wolves to the Slaughter

May 16, 2013 18:59

This is an intersection for LJ Idol on the topics "Chillin' Like a Villain" and "You Did the Best You Could." My partner is the lovely kathrynrose.
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playing with archetypes, ljidol, fiction

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kathrynrose May 16 2013, 23:46:36 UTC
Yay!

Fighting seven time zones and two hemispheres and LJ outages and simultaneous writer funkiness and gettin' it did anyway!

::POM POMS for us::

Thanks for being my partner and the best writing buddy a girl could ever have!

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whipchick May 17 2013, 12:51:51 UTC
YAY!!! Thanks for being awesome! I love working with you and had a great time!!

::POM POMS::

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medleymisty May 17 2013, 00:12:32 UTC
Oooh, I like. I want to know what the package was!

Your styles melded together very well.

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whipchick May 17 2013, 12:52:11 UTC
I do too!

Thanks :)

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tatdatcm May 17 2013, 04:27:08 UTC
Loved this side of the intersection. I'm so impressed with the dialogue and dialect. This part made me sad though.

I said this in kathrynrose's thread, and I'll rephrase it here -- I love that neither of you "claimed" a topic, but wrote pieces that fit both at the same time.

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whipchick May 17 2013, 12:53:05 UTC
Thank you - I spent a long time on the dialect and got some input from friends of mine who are closer to that world, so I'm so pleased it worked for you. It makes me sad, too - now I want to write more of Tee.

And yeah - I liked having us fit both topics!

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witches May 18 2013, 04:53:36 UTC
This is great and blends so well together!

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whipchick May 18 2013, 14:49:32 UTC
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed :)

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halfshellvenus May 21 2013, 06:19:10 UTC
I liked the flip here, where the "wolves" were the good guys and Red was the villain. Poor Tee.

Love the humor and the "flavor" of the Marcus and Tee section. and the chilliness of Red's opening sequence.

But what I really liked was that you both got to tell the story from all the characters' POVs (and shifted), and yet it still feels as if it could have been written by one person!

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kathrynrose May 21 2013, 20:49:17 UTC
Wow, I count that high praise. Thank you.

Allison and I have a good relationship. That made it easier.

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whipchick May 22 2013, 07:37:25 UTC
Thank you! And I'm glad you got the Red reference :) And even gladder that it all feels like it fits together!

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