Beautiful. I love how you describe Liyin's feelings towards Junsu and how you picture Junsu as a gentle and always positive person. The end makes it very sad, she knows she gives up a bit of her own life for every single time she acts like he's still alive. But it's a very real example for true love. Really, I think this is an awesome piece of writing.
Thank you! I thought she needed that positive force and it felt like it made them perfect for each other. And I still think they are, even with the sad ending. They were and are perfect for each other.
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I love how you describe Liyin's feelings towards Junsu and how you picture Junsu as a gentle and always positive person.
The end makes it very sad, she knows she gives up a bit of her own life for every single time she acts like he's still alive. But it's a very real example for true love.
Really, I think this is an awesome piece of writing.
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I thought she needed that positive force and it felt like it made them perfect for each other. And I still think they are, even with the sad ending. They were and are perfect for each other.
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