in a quiet world (redux)
in a quiet world (redux)
gdragon/top
dystopian au; a second take on in a quiet world, a drabble i wrote a long time ago. both are based on the quiet world by jeffrey mcdaniel.
rated r (violence)
3, 589 words
warning: please do not read if violence triggers you.
( The first time they meet, the word quarantine is still in the thousands and Seunghyun is on the verge of drunk. )
gdragon/top
dystopian au; a second take on in a quiet world, a drabble i wrote a long time ago. both are based on the quiet world by jeffrey mcdaniel.
rated r (violence)
3, 589 words
warning: please do not read if violence triggers you.
( The first time they meet, the word quarantine is still in the thousands and Seunghyun is on the verge of drunk. )
....okay it is now five minutes later and i think i've sufficiently calmed myself down enough to not leave you just that one phrase. i can't believe this. i can't believe you.
first, for putting in the thing about one having to kill the other - i wanted to die and i honestly went NOOOOOOO when i got to it and even though it didnt happen the events succeeding it were just, ugh. it hurt so bad :c. i was so terrified :c i literally got chills down my back. i hate (love) how the only reason that top even became proactive was because of gd, that gd wished he cared and wanted him to be braver and then he was, sobs. i hate how you put lighter moments in between the terror going on that stuck with me and just broke my heart like the peanut allergy, and moments at the bar, and gd writing i love you on top's palm and how HE REMEMBERED, and the words on gd's body smearing. and on top of that you put JAY in this and top lying in gd's lap and I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU. also, this: Seunghyun drags a finger along the skin of Jiyong’s arm (vita dolce). sldkglsgsla.
i really want to believe the end but i can't get it out of my head that they died and the rescue mission and post-dystopian world are all just hallucinations right before gd passes. alfkaglaskgoei hdu.
fml i always try to be semi-eloquent when i review but it never happens
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ok so just suffice it to say that your comment made my lunchtime/just woken up time/early afternoon time. ugh i was wondering if their characterization was inconsistent because they kept changing their minds and everything but idk, flaws and all of that. JAYYYY. i'm glad you liked the tattoo things too ;;
SIGH do you have to, now i can't get that interpretation out of my mind either y u do this~
haha it's ok i gotchu ♥
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I think exactly the same.
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