the big sleep

Feb 07, 2010 19:14

the big sleep
gdragon/top
pg-13
jiyong has a plan. based on this:

lovelyable : aw now i have top and gd sleeping for two days on top's bed in my head
lovelyable : how precious
whetstone : so qt :3 although lol @ top sleeping for two days too
lovelyable : he would like set an alarm
lovelyable : and gd would turn it off
lovelyable : and then top awakens like 36 hrs later hungry as shit like WHAT TIME IS IT
whetstone : LMFAO ( Read more... )

!fanfiction, length: oneshot, type: romance, fandom: big bang, pairing: gdragon/top

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xbigbangx February 8 2010, 03:26:13 UTC
omg what spot.

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xbigbangx February 8 2010, 03:43:56 UTC
bahaha, aaaww that was sweet (:
lol. I could totally see TOP calculating the calories. aah why is he so cuuutte.
I liked this a loot, my fav line was:

‘why would you have all these creepy toys when you can have me?’”

thanks for this. I was raging earlier and this kinda helped me calm down a bit (:

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whetstone February 9 2010, 01:36:26 UTC
lol i actually read somewhere that he's the best at counting calories in big bang.

thank you! lmfao i didn't know if i wanted to add that line, cause i thought it might be too much, but i'm glad you enjoyed it.

i'm happy it helped you calm down. :)

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gdgdbaby February 8 2010, 03:43:52 UTC
YOU ARE ALWAYS LIKE THIS OH MY GOD WHY ARE YOU SO GREAT AHHHHH SERIOUSLY.
THE DESCRIPTION AND QTNESS AND EVERYTHING I JUST CAN'T--

the dialogue was amazing and lol top, the ever oblivious one. haha i loved the stickynotes too, keke big bang :3 you're always the best at fluff. the whole piece makes me feel so comfortable :'D

ALSO GIRL CAN YOU STOP FADING TO BLACK. ;~; ♥

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whetstone February 9 2010, 01:37:43 UTC
AHHH TY TY. :[

comfortable? i like that haha. :3

I WASN'T GOING TO BUT THEN I DID BUT NOW IDK IF I SHOULD HAVE. I MIGHT MAKE EDITS AND STUFF LATER IDEK. ♥

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a11i_sun February 8 2010, 03:55:51 UTC
“I know you like to boss me around. You trying to piss me off or something? That what you’re waiting for?”

That is erm EXTREMELY SEXY. xD
This fanfic is very characteristic of them. Luved it. ^^

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whetstone February 9 2010, 01:41:47 UTC
haha >__>
thank you so much! it makes me happy to hear that they come off like themselves in this.

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whetstone February 9 2010, 01:42:36 UTC
ahhh, thank you so much! ;~;

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butterflyweb February 8 2010, 04:05:44 UTC
Ten thousand and one kinds of adorable. I just...your characterization just gets me right in the gut, because it's so perfect, especially Seunghyun. I love how you make him fail without being a loser, and incorporate all of the wonderful little quirks and oddities we glimpse in them to a cohesive, lovable whole. I really like the awkward of Jiyong's master plan and Seunghyun's foot in mouth syndrome and the whole thing made fuzzy squirrels burrow in my chest as well.

Lovely.

Omg, what i wouldn't give to sleep for two days

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whetstone February 9 2010, 01:48:17 UTC
thank you!! sometimes i wonder if like... they come off as veering too far one way or another as far as characterization goes, just cause i can never figure out the balance between the different facets of their personalities. they keep switching it up on me, so to hear that everything came off all right is like... alkdsj i don't know, reassuring. haha.

thank you again. :D

i know right? it sounds like heaven

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whetstone February 9 2010, 02:09:55 UTC
lmfao girrrl.


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