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Jun 09, 2009 17:48

Cheap Shot
by whereupon
Sam/Dean, vague first season spoilers, nc-17, 5,729 words.
Any minute now, Dean's going to say something, and it's the waiting that's killing Sam.

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giandujakiss June 10 2009, 10:25:19 UTC
Man, this is gorgeous. I love the way you portray their relationship, capturing everything that's between them, including (but not limited to) their relationship just as brothers.

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whereupon June 12 2009, 18:40:39 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. <3!

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sloane_m June 10 2009, 11:18:52 UTC
God this so descriptive. I love how oppressive Sam's anger feels and the ratcheting of tension throughout the entire story. Wonderful.

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whereupon June 12 2009, 22:46:27 UTC
Thank you so much! <33

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whereupon June 12 2009, 23:03:10 UTC
I am slowly getting out of the habit of killing off characters. Which is perhaps a good thing! Though there's still tragedy, it's just for other reasons, so perhaps not.

I am so glad that you liked this one. Thank you, very much.

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innie_darling June 10 2009, 14:37:55 UTC
That is just gorgeous.

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whereupon June 12 2009, 23:22:34 UTC
Thank you, very much! :D

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nigeltde June 10 2009, 16:09:18 UTC
wow, this is so totally awesome, intense and vivid and needy just like I like it and I particularly love the last few paragraphs. Thanks for sharing!

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whereupon June 13 2009, 02:24:49 UTC
Thank you, very much! I'm so glad that this one seemed right, that it worked. :D

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