fic: brutality

[whereupon]

Brutality

season three. bela. unrated. 1160 words.
She does not want to be here.
Thanks to reddened and vinylroad for looking this over.

Comments

[elses]

So I spent what had to be at least five minutes sitting here, contemplating how I should give feedback (you know, making it at least a little different than what I usually say), but I'm stumped. I do love your writing, and I blame your eloquence for thieving all of mine. I love how you're able to create reality out of nothing.

And I like your new userpics, you need to post some someday, alongside a story.

[whereupon]

And I believe you know exactly how much time I spend replying to said feedback, with the same considerations, yes? And I continually fail. Still! Thank you, very much!

(Also thank you for the userpic compliment!)

[vinylroad]

This is just really phenomenal. It's so rare to see a fic solely about Bela and done THIS well. I like the fuzzy reality of this, almost outside of the SPN world, but still anchored down by it. And your characterization of her in this feels so authentic. Great stuff.

[whereupon]

Thank you, so much. I am, as you probably know, so very glad this worked for you. :D

[santacarlagypsy]

Oh, man... I love this! You've written Bela perfectly. ♥

[whereupon]

Thank you! ♥

[astrothsknot]

An excellent look at my favourite SPN character

[whereupon]

Thank you! :)

[alchemise]

This is an amazing look at Bela and makes me feel the same kind of sympathy for her that the show did, even while I hated many of the decisions she made.

[whereupon]

That's a lovely compliment -- thank you, very much!