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sharp (torchwood)

Feb 18, 2008 19:59

"Sharp"

Torchwood: Ianto/Jack, spoilers for 2.05. Ianto remembers. 670 words.

( He sees them sometimes. )

Comments 33

pixienamedkatie February 19 2008, 12:57:10 UTC

I really enjoyed this. Your writing style is very fluid, and I particularly like things that are divided up into parts. Your characterisation is also spot on, to my eyes.

whereupon February 20 2008, 02:23:00 UTC

Thank you very much! :)

sistercarrion February 19 2008, 12:58:39 UTC

I adore this. It's been playing on my mind too recently. What if they were reminded.. what if just out the corner of their minds?

whereupon February 20 2008, 02:33:09 UTC

Thank you! :D

copycatgirl February 19 2008, 13:30:35 UTC

This is really good. I wondered along the same lines- in Everything Changes, Gwen just had little flashes after she'd been retconned and I wondered what would happen in this case. Very well written :)

whereupon February 20 2008, 03:24:32 UTC

Thank you so much. :)

copycatgirl February 20 2008, 09:01:52 UTC

You're welcome! :)

_bettina_ February 19 2008, 16:08:21 UTC

This was really great!

whereupon February 20 2008, 05:07:38 UTC

Thank you! :)

badwolf36 February 19 2008, 16:09:55 UTC

I really enjoyed this. The little bits and pieces that survived and the way they affected Ianto were just perfect. And the bit about Tosh was just heart-breaking. Thanks for sharing!

whereupon February 20 2008, 05:53:56 UTC

Thank you -- I'm so glad it worked for you! :D