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Oct 08, 2010 18:00

Drowning
by whereupon
Supernatural: Lisa/Dean, spoilers through 6.02, PG, 750 words.
On fairy tales for girls.

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borgmama1of5 October 9 2010, 02:39:13 UTC
Beautiful. The imagery of the silver chain is so potent!

Love the poetic-ness of this.

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whereupon October 12 2010, 20:28:05 UTC
You always say such lovely things! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this one -- thank you. :)

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mdlaw October 9 2010, 04:56:50 UTC
Beautiful imagery..... m :)

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whereupon October 12 2010, 20:34:25 UTC
Thank you! :)

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lavinialavender October 9 2010, 06:04:55 UTC
Very nice piece. As ever, you write poetry in prose. :) Love this insight.

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whereupon October 12 2010, 22:23:49 UTC
That's such an awesome compliment -- thank you, as always! :)

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whereupon October 12 2010, 23:36:15 UTC
Thank you! :)

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elizardbits October 9 2010, 17:22:56 UTC
How do you fit so much beautiful and evocative imagery into just 4 paragraphs? HOW.

Seriously, your writing engages all the senses, like a dream that makes reality seem false.

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whereupon October 14 2010, 00:09:28 UTC
Thank you, very much! That's such a fantastic compliment -- I really appreciate it. :)

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