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Jun 16, 2010 15:22

Noir
by whereupon
Sam/Dean. PG, no spoilers, 5,208 words.
The boundaries of Sam's universe have begun to blur.

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whereupon June 24 2010, 20:24:05 UTC
For me they are forever associated with that one song, which is -- entertaining, anyway?

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tabaqui June 17 2010, 03:54:17 UTC
Christ.
Well, i'm broken right along with Dean. Jayzus.

And this...and the night's shipwrecked outside of the window, current-dragged and full of ghosts.

Gorgeous. Sam's brain spinning off into weird places, circular thoughts, everything centered around Dean, Dean, and Dean.

*sniffles a little*

Damn.

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whereupon June 24 2010, 21:32:07 UTC
Apologies for the breaking! And thank you so much for the note -- I'm so glad that you enjoyed this one. ♥

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sistabro June 17 2010, 05:47:22 UTC
oh wow, just wow.

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whereupon June 24 2010, 21:53:33 UTC
Thank you very much! :D

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lolabobs June 17 2010, 07:16:59 UTC
I really liked this, you have a wonderful way of writing that made me feel Sam's confusion and disorientation - and his fear and sorrow at the end. Fabulous!

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whereupon June 24 2010, 23:13:25 UTC
Thank you, very much! I'm so glad that the story was effective, and that you enjoyed it. :D

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superwicked June 17 2010, 08:58:58 UTC
He wonders if Dean ever finds it exhausting to be the complete and total focus of Sam's life.
What a gorgeous thought and it's so true, for Dean too!

I really loved reading this. Disorientating as it was to be in Sam's head, there's a lot of truth coming from him when he is not in control of his thoughts!

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whereupon June 24 2010, 23:28:58 UTC
Thank you so much! ♥

there's a lot of truth coming from him when he is not in control of his thoughts!

As much fun as it can be to write denial and repression, writing the exact opposite is kind of fun, too. :D

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