FIC - Shipwrecked - Lost... but found (1/3)

[wheelie47]

Title: Shipwrecked - Lost... but found (1/3)
Author/Artist: Wheelie47
Beta: Valenti1965 - thanks for your support and encouragement, Louise!
Rating: NC17 (eventually)
Disclaimer: Don't own the boys!
Characters/Pairings: Van and Jake (JANSIS)
Word Count: approx 10,500 (in total)
Warnings: A little bit of angst.
Summary: Van and Jake are shipwrecked on a desert island.

Comments

[valenti1965]

Oh my poor baby! So glad he lived lol bet Noah is also!! Now he can tell Van how he feels! Great start Anne! Just how will they survive on a deser island and what will they get upto?!? Off to find out!x

[wheelie47]

Thanks Louise! Glad you liked the first chapter.

Sorry but you know I wouldn't hurt Van for too long!

Just what will they get up to, I wonder lol ;)

[buttercup32409]

Poor Jake! He had to be panicked to find Van in that condition. Now that they're both conscious, it's time for them to realize what's right in front of their noses.

[wheelie47]

Thanks Nita! Yeah he must've been out of mind with worry.

Oh yeah they should definitely admit to their feelings!

Thanks for reading.

[sarahsezlove]

You had me going, there, Anne.
Of course my head knew Van had to be okay, but my heart took a few moments to catch up.
Love the laughter.

[wheelie47]

LOL thanks Sarah. Now you know I wouldn't hurt Van too badly. It'd be a pretty short story if I killed him off in the first chapter!

Thanks for reading!

[123cariad]

Oh and breath lol poor Jake what he must have gone through ..fab first chapter Anne x

[wheelie47]

lol yes breathe, Stella! Poor Jake. Glad you liked the first chapter.

Thanks for reading xx

[jb1183]

You know you're being told a story by a gifted writer when they are able to build genuine tension and suspense over the fate of a character that you know for certain isn't going to die. You did a great job with that section in particular, Anne, and with that whole first chapter!

[wheelie47]

Thanks so much for the wonderful comment, Jim. Glad the suspense and tension came through in the story.

But you know I wouldn't hurt Van too badly; it would be a pretty short story if I killed him in the first chapter lol.

Thanks for reading.