Fic - First Knight (4/?)

[wheelie47]

Title: First Knight (4/?)
Author: wheelie47
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Luke and Noah.
Word count: 2,575
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT, Van and Jake. No offence intended.
Summary: Set in the fictional land of feudal Western Atlantia, King Damian has been overthrown and has fled the Kingdom of Oakdale. But his evil influence

Comments

[sarahsezlove]

OH - MY - GOD!!!

I am totally in awe of this story, Anne. You are a master teller.

I loved the dream sequence - such tenderness between Luke and Noah, and I just know that it will be exactly like that in their reality.

Your description of Casey just cracked me up - although I wonder whether he's quite the innocent klutz he appears to be. I'd like to know who he's spending his nights drinking with and what secrets he's spilling whilst in his cups.

And the end??? Talk about the perfect cliffhanger. I'm not sure my clinging finger nails will survive to the next installment! Don't make my manicurist wait...please :)

[wheelie47]

Thank you so much, Sarah. You're making me blush!!

We might have to wait a little while to see the real thing between them. But they'll get there!

Mmm! Does Casey know more than he's letting on? And who is he drinking late into the night with? We'll have to wait and see!

Hope the manicurist doesn't bill you by the day lol

Thanks again xx

[newhaven183]

Whoa...a person could get whiplash reading this chapter...so convinced the dream sequence was real...great scene. To have Casey bring Luke out of it...clever.

knew that the relationship was going to face some challenges. just didn't know it would involved the ole(sic) sword to the side of the head blow. Just goes to show you what can happened when you don't keep body and mind on sword play.

great chapter,anne. anxiously awaiting the next chapter....any chance of it coming by the morrow!

[wheelie47]

lol thanks so much, Sue. Yeah, I know, I was kinda bad throwing that in there. But I wanted to spice things up a bit and show how much Luke was thinking about Noah!

Luke certainly needs to keep his mind on his sword play, doesn't he?!

I'm guessing the answer to your question is no ;) lol

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Your support always means so much xx

[boriqua522]

OMFG!!! NOOOOO!!!! YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE ME HANGING THERE!! omg, you just want to kill me, don't you? that dream was so freaking HAWT! i think the filling melted in my mouth ;} hope they get to play out that dream soon ;] now i can't wait for the next chapter. please don't keep us (me) waiting too long ;p

[wheelie47]

Thanks so much for reading! Yeah, I know, I was kinda bad for leaving you hanging at the end there.

Glad you liked the dream sequence. Hope your dentist doesn't mind too much about your filling!

I promise I'll get the next chapter up as soon as I can!

Thanks again x

[123cariad]

Wonderful dream sequence ... God Anne why did you leave hanging lol what an ending x

[wheelie47]

Thanks so much, Stella. Glad you liked the dream sequence lol

I know, I'm very bad for leaving it there. I promise I won't leave you hanging too long.

Thanks again. Your support means so much x

[seajellybaby]

Cruel on two parts...

First - You turn that hot scene into a dream! LOL

Second - LUKE!

Otherwise just perfect at usual! This is one of the best period fics I've ever read! LOVE IT!

[wheelie47]

Cruel? Me...nah... never. OK, I'll give you the dream sequence lol But I know someone else who likes to write a few cliff hanger chapters here and there!! lol

Thanks so much, Gill! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so much.