FIC - Its still just love... (5/?)

[wheelie47]

Title: It's still just love… (5/?)
Author: wheelie47
Rating: NC17 for this chapter.
Pairing: Luke and Noah.
Word count: 3,991
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT, Van and Jake. No offence intended.
Summary: Noah Mayer is struggling to make ends meet; trying to keep his garden centre open and desperate to hold onto his research

Comments

[alexxgalaxy]

He felt Noah stiffen at the exact same moment the door sprung open, spilling them both through the opening and onto the floor beyond.

I started to feel the heat until...I found the scene was a little hilarious. LOL

Not that I complained that I totally didn't expect to see the boys got together in the new chapter. Who knew one touch could set off a fire like this?

[wheelie47]

Lol thanks for reading and commenting!

Yeah it is quite comical up to that point.

But it was about time they got together and I guess the fire was always simmering below the surface it just needed a spark to ignite it ;-)

Thanks again.

[123cariad]

Just perfect !even though I know the film you are making the story your own I just love the feelings and the chemistry between them I just in love with it !!

[wheelie47]

Thanks so much Stella. I'm so glad that you're liking my version of the film.

Anne x

[newhaven183]

“She’s not my girlfriend. We’re just friends!” He couldn’t believe he was having to explain this now!

“Really?!” The eyebrow arched even higher.

“Yes! Does this feel like I’m straight to you?!” He bucked his hips down onto Noah’s, rolling his erection against the handsome brunette’s to create a delicious friction that tantalised and spoke of what was to come.

How the hell was Noah supposed to know...lol Great scene btwn two experienced babes in the woods... err office...err bedroom floor.

[wheelie47]

I know right! I guess in the heat of the moment Luke must've thought Noah was a mind reader ;-)

Thanks Sue.

[crownroyal_51]

The boys had some hot sex. It was nice to see Luke be with someone who cared about him instead of the one night stands he was used to. These two have a lot to talk about though! Looking forward to it! :)

[wheelie47]

Thanks so much!

Let's hope Noah can show Luke just what being in love really means. And they really do need to have that talk LOL

[sarahsezlove]

Loved the movie - but this is so much better.
I'm a written word kinda gal!!

[wheelie47]

Thanks so much Sarah. So glad that you're liking my version of the film.

And I am with you on that one - I'm a written word kinda girl too x