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FIC - It's still just love... (4/?)

Feb 01, 2012 16:08

Title: It's still just love… (4/?)
Author: wheelie47
Rating: NC17 for whole story but not every chapter.
Pairing: Luke and Noah.
Word count: 3,242
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT, Van and Jake. No ffence intended.
Summary: Noah Mayer is struggling to make ends meet; trying to keep his garden centre open and desperate to ( Read more... )

alternative universe, atwt, luke, fanfiction, noah

Comments 17

123cariad February 1 2012, 18:26:29 UTC

I loved this chapter !!!!!!! the last paragraph explaining the touch was perfect ,just love it !

wheelie47 February 9 2012, 10:35:02 UTC

Thanks so much Stella. Glad you liked it. And that touch whether cannon or AU will always get to them in the end! How long will they be able to resist each other?!

newhaven183 February 1 2012, 23:26:27 UTC

this story continues to hold me hostage and . . . i dont want to flee. . . for anything.

great chapter, anne!

wheelie47 February 9 2012, 10:36:27 UTC

Thanks Sue! lol glad you're liking this story. And it looks like there are going to be quite a few chapters so I should bring rations! ;)

boriqua522 February 2 2012, 04:37:13 UTC

wow, i can't believe i haven't been reading this all along. poor luke, to have to live his life in constant fear of losing his family. intellectual yet dirty noah, has got to be the best of both worlds ;} gets all hot and sweaty but can look through a microscope and become a hot professor, yum... can't wait for the boys to give into their feelings. this is great. please continue soon.

wheelie47 February 9 2012, 10:38:30 UTC

Thanks so much for reading and commenting <3 Glad you enjoyed this chapter.

I'm with you there on Noah! OH YES! Clever but hot and doesnt mind getting down and dirty lol

How long will they be able to resist each other for?!

crownroyal_51 February 2 2012, 20:25:56 UTC

I love how when they touch it's electric - both in canon and in this story! Looking forward to more! :)

wheelie47 February 9 2012, 10:39:47 UTC

Thanks! Oh yes - who can resist that touch?! How long will they be able to hold out for?

asonearth February 3 2012, 16:05:42 UTC

wonderful chapter!! i like how Noah and Luje get along. it's still si sad to see Luke like this. he has to defend himself over and over , just by talking to guy (Carl) and Matteo is a pain in the a... poor MArc. to see this has to make it unbearable for Luke and it makes Luke's situation a lot more complicated. even Lilly is no help here, her ""it's best to keep it quiet is sad i'm curious how you are going to solve this...right now it's plain horrible for Luke, even if he loves his father.
YAY, the last part though was beautiful, i could feel the sparks and the electricity, literally... and Noah's ""oh shit"" says it all :) thanks for another great chapter<3 Annette

wheelie47 February 9 2012, 10:51:01 UTC

Thanks so much Annette, for your wonderful comments! Glad you're enjoying the story.

Poor Luke - his situation seems to get more and more complicated by the minute. He seems to have no support at all from his family, Maddie is the only one there for him at the moment.

How long will our boys be able to resist each other?!

Thanks again, Anne x