Comments | wheelie47: FIC - Where the heart is (1/1)

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FIC - Where the heart is (1/1) - JANSIS

Dec 17, 2011 17:29

Title: Where the heart is (1/1)
Author: Wheelie47
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Van and Jake
Word count: 3,890
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT, Van and Jake. No offence intended.
Summary: Van watches Jake's ‘We Love Soaps’ interview…

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jake, fanfiction, van, jansis

Comments 14

daan73 December 18 2011, 01:16:39 UTC

aww Anne I loved it You are so good in Jansis
you rock it girl!!
Thanks for another wonderful story
your stories are what keeps me loviing them so much <3
Dani x

wheelie47 December 23 2011, 16:38:18 UTC

Aww thanks Dani! So glad you liked it *you're making me blush*

They are just too good together not to keep writing about them <3

newhaven183 December 18 2011, 02:19:27 UTC

… just as long as Jake was with him… because Jake was his home… Jake was where his heart was.

Damn girl! You know exactly how to warm up the coldest of late fall nights...btr than a damn tall hot chocolate from Starbucks!

This was perfect...as usual!

wheelie47 December 23 2011, 16:42:28 UTC

Thanks Sue!

Love the line you chose to quote. It's my favourite; I'm a big 'ole romantic at heart.

'Btr than a damn hot chocolate from Starbucks' - wow high praise indeed lol.

Glad you liked it.

I'm still thinking of ways to fit a trumpet in next time ;)

newhaven183 January 19 2012, 02:50:06 UTC

oh goody...lol can't wait to read jansis...the musical.

random_nic December 18 2011, 21:55:32 UTC

I'm sure I've said this before, but I'm continually amazed by your ability to seamlessly blend the sexy with the schmoop. On the one hand, their lovemaking is needy and steamy; on the other, their emotional connection is sweet and comforting. Nicely done, Anne!

wheelie47 December 23 2011, 16:54:05 UTC

Thanks for that comment Nic. I'm really glad you think it worked. Sometimes I wonder if I get the balance right. What I have difficulty with getting right is the dialogue during the sex scene... sometimes I feel like it sounds like a bad 70's porn film! Not that I watch bad 70's porn lol

Thanks again!

valenti1965 December 19 2011, 22:32:15 UTC

Our Queen is back...with one amazing Jansis..Love how current this is...and love how much Van was craving Jake's touch. So damn good Anne....u r just the best!!!! xxx

wheelie47 December 23 2011, 16:58:25 UTC

Thanks Lou! Glad you liked it!

I love writing about these two, can't seem to stop lol

I can just picture that scene in my mind with Van sitting down to watch Jake!

Thanks again <3

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wheelie47 December 23 2011, 17:12:20 UTC

Thanks Tom! She did didn't she. It's my favourite too; I'm a big 'ole romantic at heart.

I always love to fit bits of 'real-ness' in; I think it makes it come to life (well that's the plan anyway!!)

And the hotness? Well... these two kind of do it all on their own ;)

Thanks again!

Anne x