Comments | wheelie47: FIC - Force of Nature (8/9)

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FIC - Force of Nature (8/9)

Nov 03, 2011 18:57

Title: Force of Nature (8/9)
Author: Wheelie47
Rating: R - NC17 for the whole story
Pairing: Luke and OC, Luke and Noah.
Word count: 4,164
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT, Van and Jake. No offence intended.
Summary: Noah is a Professor at the California Institute of Seismic Research and Luke is a freelance ( Read more... )

alternative universe, atwt, luke, fanfiction, noah

Comments 15

crownroyal_51 November 3 2011, 20:28:19 UTC

Cliffhanger! How will the boys get out of this one?

Loved the sexytimes between the boys. It was so sweet. Looking forward to seeing how you wrap this all up in the next chapter!

wheelie47 November 11 2011, 16:16:38 UTC

Dum! Dum! Duumm! Yes a cliffhanger indeed! What will happen? How will Luke and Noah get out of this one?

Glad you liked the sexy times. Can't go wrong with a bit of nuke sexy time LOL

Thanks for reading and commenting!

cindyls1969 November 3 2011, 20:46:03 UTC

Well, Anne my dear, seems to me that someone is going to have get heroic...or it's time for a fortuitous earthquake. Either way? I can't wait!!

wheelie47 November 11 2011, 16:18:34 UTC

Thanks Cindy! Yes, what's going to happen next??! How will our boys get out of this?!

Hope you stay tuned to find out LOL.

newhaven183 November 3 2011, 22:37:48 UTC

Luke barely paused as he registered where Noah’s hands were; this time instead of being reminded of Jon he was fuelled by the knowledge that he was starting something new… something better with Noah.

Tender and sweet and warm/hot and a cliffhanger to boot - what more could a reader want.

God bless computer software technology! Oh and the writer's OK, too. :)

wheelie47 November 11 2011, 16:21:05 UTC

LOL! Thanks Sue. And the reader is okay as well :-)

Yes a cliffhanger indeed! What will happen next?!

karen_jk November 3 2011, 23:06:05 UTC

Um...guys, confronting a desperate man is pretty risky. think first?

I always love just-can't-wait sex. :)

wheelie47 November 11 2011, 16:22:30 UTC

Um yeah probably not the best idea they've ever had! They definitely needed to think first.

And yes that's the best kind of sex ;-)

Thanks for reading and commenting.

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wheelie47 November 11 2011, 16:26:45 UTC

Yes a cliffhanger indeed! What's going to happen next? How will our boys get out of this one?

Glad you liked the love scene Tom and that line is one of my favourites too.

Yes Holden is only worried about his son... he only wants the best for him but you're right I don't think Holden need worry.

Thanks again Tom.

Anne x