Comments | wheelie47: FIC - Force of Nature (6/?)

wheelie47

FIC - Force of Nature (6/?)

Oct 16, 2011 18:57

Title: Force of Nature (6/?)
Author: Wheelie47
Rating: R - NC17 for the whole story
Pairing: Luke and OC, Luke and Noah.
Word count: 4,835
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT, Van and Jake. No offence intended.
Summary: Noah is a Professor at the California Institute of Seismic Research and Luke is a freelance ( Read more... )

alternative universe, atwt, luke, fanfiction, noah

Comments 22

cindyls1969 October 16 2011, 18:32:43 UTC

Awww, too adorable. Oh and I'm hoping for Jons painful death in the next earthquake, in case you were wondering!

wheelie47 October 21 2011, 22:37:59 UTC

Thanks Cindy! So glad you liked it! Mmm?! What's going to happen to Jon?

123cariad October 16 2011, 18:50:51 UTC

So tender ! such emotion on all levels excellent xx

wheelie47 October 21 2011, 22:38:48 UTC

Thank you so much. It was quite an emotional chapter wasn't it? So glad you liked it <3

newhaven183 October 16 2011, 20:01:17 UTC

Luke felt such an intense emotion bursting in his chest that Noah was prepared to give him this… to connect with him like this that he would wait… wait for as long as Noah needed. He reached hesitantly out to rub soothing circles over Noah’s abdomen to ease the pain.

Such a beautiful and suspensefully written chapter....can't wait to read what happens next.

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wheelie47 October 21 2011, 22:40:36 UTC

Thanks Sue for the wonderful comment. So pleased you liked it <3

valenti1965 October 16 2011, 21:08:45 UTC

Oh god Anne...you are one amazing writer indeed. What a beautiful love making scene that was....Just what we all wanted and needed. Jon is an asshole and I 2nd Cindy...a big hole won't be big enough for him ggggrrrr.

So..Noah's boss is getting back handers....hope they work to expose him.

Fabulous chapter...can't wait for the next one already! xxx

wheelie47 October 21 2011, 22:50:01 UTC

Thanks Lou! What an amazing and wonderful comment. Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.

Glad you liked the love making - they got there in the end ;)

Will they work together to expose the corruption. Hope you stay tuned to find out lol

Thanks again!

Anne x

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wheelie47 October 21 2011, 23:03:00 UTC

Thanks Tom for such a wonderful comment. So glad you're enjoying the story and that you liked the chapter.

Always love fitting a bit of Snyder family love into the mix if I can. Always love a bit of Holden.

Glad you liked the scenes between Luke and Noah in the kitchen and in the bedroom. So touching that Noah knew exactly what Luke needed and to be strong enough to give him that.

Lets hope they can work together to expose the corruption.

Thanks again!