Astral Bodies

[what_alchemy]

Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Word Count: ~23,000
Warnings: underaged sexuality, graphic sex, rimming, Tarsus angst, copious hurt/comfort clichés, painful characterizations, bogus science, adjective and adverb abuse, heavy schmoop
Disclaimer: Under no circumstances am I affiliated with Star Trek or anyone who owns Star Trek. No offense or

Comments

[what_alchemy]

Thank you!

[what_alchemy]

Glad you like it!

[baggins_n]

wow. I must admit underage sex is usually what I stay clear of but you did this one right. I love Spock tone so much, he's desperate and conflicted. I also love that you didn't directly said what happen on Taurus but lets the reader decide how bad it would be.

[what_alchemy]

Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to be more subtle about the Tarsus stuff because readers don't need to be beaten over the head with what happened there, and also because Jim's immediate company is his bondmate and his personal medical practitioners - people who don't need to be told what he went through, so readers don't need to be told either. I'm glad that this worked for you and didn't seem like a lack in the writing. Thanks again!

[faithintheboys]

This is amazing. I'm so impressed with the characterization and story line and cannot wait to read more. Fantastic job.