Comments | west_gate: Fic: Heir Apparent, Chapter 3

melyanna in west_gate

Fic: Heir Apparent, Chapter 3

May 17, 2006 22:31

I had a rather embarrassing moment last night when I was doing some research for a scene in this. It turns out that all the Nobel prizes except the peace prize are presented in Stockholm. The peace prize is awarded in Oslo. . . Norway, not Sweden. The previous chapters have been edited to reflect this. (And someday I'll learn to do all my ( Read more... )

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freifraufischer May 18 2006, 03:49:59 UTC

“That, or a torrid affair with the admiral in Uruguay.”

My favorite line for this installment... probably because I've read too many torrid spy novels in my life.

sg_lab May 18 2006, 04:21:11 UTC

There were so many moments I liked in this chapter I can't pick one. I'm looking forward to more.

hatcheter May 18 2006, 04:45:47 UTC

“She tried to assign me an essay once.”

“She did not!” Ellie exclaimed.

“She did!” he replied. “It was totally surreal, and she was really embarrassed.”

LOL. I hope that's not just a throwaway line.

anonymous May 18 2006, 06:33:07 UTC

HHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

i like the line marcus says about liz not being a politcian, and then the bartlett reactions.
r we going to get a wedding scene of john/liz? is ellie and marcus gonna marry?
cadman's funny.
and i really liked he bit about john being on top of the list that needs help getting out of trouble. and cool way to bring in john's math background.
and in the universe, does liz know john passed the mensa?

freifraufischer May 18 2006, 21:57:41 UTC

You might want to consider stopping the exaggerated happy/fluffy/squealing, it doesn't come off well, and if you are looking for fluff and lots of romance this is definitely the wrong fic author for you.

msraven929 May 18 2006, 07:13:48 UTC

Great update...I really like seeing things from Lorne's POV. Poor Lorne, it's got to be hard to think of Elizabeth as a politician when she's been his "commander" for so many years.

I have to ask though, is this a slight jab at those on the Weir threads that claimed she wasn't a politician? ;-)

“So what do you think, she had a stint with the CIA at the end of the Cold War?”

“That, or a torrid affair with the admiral in Uruguay.”

*giggles*