Fic: Poof (2/2)

Oct 10, 2006 23:52

Part I available here.

Poof )

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angelqueen04 October 11 2006, 05:16:52 UTC
*melts into a puddle of gooey goodiness* So pwetty... *coos*

Wonderful fic, Mel! *hugs* So Lizzie's finally set to go on someday being Prez!Lizzie. *grins and bounces* Yay! :D

Heh, loved that conversation between Matt and Helen about him asking her to spy on Lizzie. *snorts* Very cute! :)

Great job!

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anonymous October 11 2006, 06:18:42 UTC
:)
more.

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sparkysluvchild October 11 2006, 06:35:32 UTC
*squee* This was just fantastic!
Loving all the fics in this AU, and this one did nothing at all to lower the outstanding average!
*huggles* Well done!

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freifraufischer October 11 2006, 10:19:22 UTC
This had a much more coherent plot than I thought it might when we were discussing it... not that fluff isn't cool to read too, but I'm kind of glad. Between Donna being pregant and John and Helen talking about kids it had a very family feeling to it... and I think Matt might stop being so sacred of her now.

I did like the idea that Elizabeth was disturbed by the idea of the democratic party running blind.... though given that I'm a democrat I wonder if that's not the normal state of affairs.

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miera_c October 11 2006, 13:03:13 UTC
Once they were out on a balcony alone with the door closed behind them, Siah let out the most pitiful whimper John could imagine. His son’s cheek was now wet against his neck, and John just held him a little tighter. “Hey, it’s okay, buddy,” he said. “I’m not going to let anything hurt you.”

*melts*

Oh thank you. You have no idea how much I needed that visual to get me through this day.

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