Comments | were_lemur: Trial

were_lemur

Trial

Sep 12, 2008 23:03

for the_little_owlThis fic is rated: PG-13 ( Read more... )

star wars: prequel trilogy, trialverse, the dreaded ofc, mace windu, gen, anakin skywalker, my fics let me show you them, au

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were_lemur September 30 2008, 07:38:58 UTC

Typo fixed, thanks! (Will have to think on how to un-fux my timeline.)

I'm glad you liked it; I've been toying with ideas of what might happen next, but I haven't got anything solidified, as yet.

were_lemur October 6 2008, 09:03:13 UTC

Part two is up.

emavalexis September 18 2008, 17:46:16 UTC

This is fucking fantastic, really. Very well-written and not a hint of Mary Sue-ism to the character, not to worry.

It also brought to mind the passages in Stover's RotS novelization where he described the Force guiding Obi-Wan's actions, particularly during his fight with Grievous. You managed to use that concept here in a beautiful and original way.

Great job.

*adds to memories*

were_lemur September 30 2008, 07:28:23 UTC

Thank you!

I was definitely thinking of Stover's descriptions; I think the RotS novelization is probably the best description of how using the Force feels.

I'm glad the story, and Givera, worked for you.