Drabble: Before You Came

Feb 09, 2008 22:59


Something a little different from me - a second-person drabble. But this one insisted on being written that way.

Fic: Before You Came
Author: wmr
Characters: Tenth Doctor, Rose Tyler, Mickey Smith, Ninth Doctor (sort of)
Summary: You follow, coat flapping at your heels, desperate to catch another glimpse of the unawakened wonder in her eyes.

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tenth doctor, drabble, rose tyler, fic

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order_of_chaos February 10 2008, 04:23:04 UTC

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wendymr February 10 2008, 20:06:52 UTC
Thank you! :)

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dave7 February 10 2008, 04:26:57 UTC
Oh, this is just... so bloody sad. Beautiful, but sad.

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wendymr February 10 2008, 04:43:34 UTC
Aww, thank you! Sad, yes, but hopeful in a way too, yes? Because he's seeing her alive and happy and carefree?

Okay, okay, just for you...

Trip of a Lifetime

You’re there, in the basement, watching the Autons stalk her. She’s terrified, but she’s fighting, telling them to stop, not to be so stupid, that they’re scaring her.

Now they’re marching on her, and her eyes show what her brain’s worked out: she’s going to die.

Except any second now she’ll end up with her back to the wall and her hand in a strange man’s. And it’ll be the beginning of the trip of a lifetime.

The younger you’s coming. You step forward, hearts pounding, zap the Auton closest to her, then reach out and grab her hand.

“Run!”

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dave7 February 10 2008, 04:45:27 UTC
... I love you. And also? OMG!

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wendymr February 10 2008, 20:07:51 UTC
lol! You should scroll down the page and read ameritrifle's Nine-POV addition to this. Amazing :)

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maniacalshen February 10 2008, 04:33:11 UTC
Awww. Nicely done!

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wendymr February 10 2008, 20:10:41 UTC
Thank you! :)

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wish_wielder February 10 2008, 04:34:10 UTC
Egads. Just...egads. Love it. <3

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wendymr February 10 2008, 20:15:58 UTC
Thank you very much! :)

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wendymr February 10 2008, 20:16:32 UTC
Thank you! :)

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