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wendymr

Sentence challenge ficlet: Ageist 1/1

Jun 21, 2007 21:52

Story: Ageist
Characters: Tenth Doctor, Jack Harkness, Rose Tyler
Rated: PG
Spoilers: None. AU: just accept that Jack returned to the TARDIS some time during S2
Disclaimer: Not mine. Darn it anyway!
Summary: It's Jack's birthday...

Written as part of the First Sentence Challenge on
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tenth doctor, challenge fic, jack harkness, rose tyler, fic, ot3

Comments 26

sunstar77 June 22 2007, 02:03:39 UTC

Cute.

wendymr June 22 2007, 02:11:10 UTC

Thank you! :)

fajrdrako June 22 2007, 02:06:51 UTC

Aww. This was cute, and a lot of fun - though I can't help thinking that the 'real' story was all contained in the final sentence, where we didn't get to see the delicious details!

wendymr June 22 2007, 02:12:19 UTC

What do you mean? He just had a couple of bulky gift-wrapped packages from the 60th-century version of PC World, didn't he? *grin*

And thank you! :)

fajrdrako June 22 2007, 02:18:03 UTC

Look up 'tease' in the dictionary, and you'll find examples - the Doctor, Rose, and wendymr.

:)

wendymr June 22 2007, 02:21:21 UTC

What, not Jack? ;)

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neadods June 22 2007, 02:30:40 UTC

he got to unwrap his real birthday present. Both of them.

Wheee!

But how does that make his birthday different than any other day?

foible June 22 2007, 02:58:59 UTC

*laughs* That was marvelous fun. :)

dave7 June 22 2007, 03:52:08 UTC

I reckon you passed up on the most fantastic last line... but this was still very, very fun. *g*

wendymr June 27 2007, 02:49:10 UTC

LOL, you would say that. But thanks :)