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wendymr

Fic: Dance with the Devil 3/ 3

Nov 11, 2010 20:20

Story: Dance with the Devil
Author: wmr / wendymr
Characters: Ninth Doctor, Rose Tyler, Jack Harkness, John Hart
Rated: PG13
Summary: Harkness's only problem is that he's forgotten the primary law of jungle survival: look out for number one.

Written for kholly in return for a very generous donation in the March Support Stacie auction. This story is a sequel ( Read more... )

hurt/comfort, jack harkness, ninth doctor, rose tyler, fic, ot3

Comments 23

juliet316 November 12 2010, 02:04:49 UTC

Very lovely ending for the OT3, and very lovely just desserts for Capt. John.

wendymr November 16 2010, 02:01:51 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

plaid_slytherin November 12 2010, 02:04:53 UTC

Yay! What a great conclusion! I loved the tension in the first scene, as well as Rose fighting back. In fact, I love her in general here - of course she'd be upset that Jack told the Doctor to kill him. I think Hart certainly got what he deserved!

wendymr November 16 2010, 02:03:06 UTC

Aww, thank you! I'm really glad you liked Rose both fighting back and getting upset with Jack. It's about time Jack realised that his new friends do care about him! As for Hart, if it wasn't that the dinosaurs he encountered were actually herbivores I might have been tempted to leave him at their mercy *g*

maniacalshen November 12 2010, 04:06:40 UTC

she almost forgot about being kidnapped.

It's okay, Rose. I'm sure a lot of the Doctor's companions get to that point.

I love her clobbering Hart, and the post-danger cuddles were very sweet. :)

wendymr November 16 2010, 02:06:03 UTC

Oh, I'm sure - so many things happen one after the other that at the end of the day it's 'I was kidnapped? Sorry, forgot about that in the excitement of almost being blown up and then dangled by my ankle off the Eiffel Tower' *g* Glad you liked Rose clobbering Hart - he richly deserved it!

kilodalton November 12 2010, 04:16:16 UTC

I really like this - good work!

wendymr November 16 2010, 02:06:14 UTC

Thank you!

honorh November 12 2010, 11:21:46 UTC

Heh. Yeah, make the bastard do his own work. He really is dumb if he ever expected that to work. And good on Rose, getting a bit of her own back! That'll teach the boys to assume she's helpless, eh? And as much as I love a good OT3-falling-into-bed fic, I think this ends perfectly, with a new adventure and maybe some new ideas working their way into a few heads . . .

It’s just his bad luck that he lands in someone’s ornamental pond.

Oh, is it? Hope he enjoys kissing the koi!

wendymr November 16 2010, 02:08:10 UTC

Oh, Rose was determined to get her own back, and it just proves that it's not always weapons or clever Oncoming Storm-type talk that takes down the bad guy. Although, of course, they all got their own bit of revenge in, which I think made the Doctor and Jack very happy also :)

And I suspect there may be a few new ideas floating around, indeed, with the kisses and cuddles we did get *g*

Now, if Hart actually manages to drown among the koi that would be even better!