Day 4 - The love that is wellymuck

[closet_zebra]

Title-- I Love You (In Dressrobes.)
Rating-- PG.
Word count-- 898
For-- Prompt four of wellymuck

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Comments

[xrated13]

Mirror! :) Kinky, LOL. Oh, and the flower was really sweet. HEHE

[exiled_mind]

You've totally won me with the romance of this, and then you hit me with that last line, and now I can't help thinking, "Oh no! Symbolism! Ahhhhh!"

Or am I reaching and seeing foreshadowing/symbolism that wasn't intentionally there? It is quite possible that I am insane, you know :)

[exiled_mind]

*snicker* And well done, at that :)

I really liked the clever way you've woven the sadness/foreshadowing in. Definitely worked (for me, at least), bravo.

[melayneseahawk]

Aww, this is so sweet!

[melayneseahawk]

It really helps the struggle to the end.

Can relate to that.

[sam_can_do_it]

Aww... This was so sweet!

I love the "I Love You" stories!

So beautiful and romantic!

You did a great job on this one, darling.

*kisses*

[andrea__88]

“You look amazing,” the usually loud voice of his boyfriend of a year whispered against his ear. Remus shivered and glanced at him, not saying anything. “Remus, stop disagreeing with me in your head. I can hear the disapproval.”
Perfect, shows how well they know each other
diving through the curtains and leaving them dishevelled and messy
I can see him doing this alot lol
The kiss that Remus placed against his lips answered the question for both of them and, as Sirius pushed him hard into the mirror behind him, he saw in the corner of his eye the little flowers slip from his pocket and fall gently to the floor.
Perfect ending, a very sweet story and happy sweet smoochy pups- perfect! :o)

[andrea__88]

lol what? it was sweet and funny and a great story
love your pups and yes they can read each other like an open book, no sense in hiding