FIC: Exit (R) for andmydog

[wispykitty]

Author: wispykitty
Recipient: andmydog
Title: Exit
Rating: R
Characters/Pairing(s): Ken, Farfarello, Schuldig (brief appearances by other members of Weiss)
Summary: It's been a week since the collapse of the tower, and every night Ken dreams of Farfarello.
Warnings: Violence.
Word Count: 2,253
Author's Notes: Also features footballer Ken!

Comments

[red_squared]

Ooh, that gave me chills D:

Why were they ignoring this?! Why weren't they helping him?!

Poor, abandoned baby :'(

Awesome fic!

[wispykitty]

Good! Well, sorry for the chills, but happy to note the creepiness came through. ;)

Yes, poor little Ken, ignored by his friends! That was definitely a rather mean dream for Schuldig to give him. :)

[nuraya]

A perfect example of why it is very dangerous to let a telepathic sociopath team up with a sadistic psychopath. :D

Lovely and chilling! I love the interchange between dream and wakefulness. I think this was very well done. ^__^

[wispykitty]

Why thank you very much, glad to hear you enjoyed it. ;) Sociopathic teams really are the best kinds of teams to write about!

[white_cross_b]

Okay, besides everything else, I love the fact that you wrote actual soccer/football in this fic! Well done!

[wispykitty]

Heh, well that would have to do with the fact that I am a huge footie fan, so any opportunity I have to include it in fic, I will. :)

[athena8]

Ooooh...freaky, trippy and gripping! I enjoyed this very much!

[wispykitty]

Thank you! It was a joy to be able to write something darker. :)

[oracle_dreams]

I really enjoyed Ken's decreasing ability to tell dream from reality, that sinister edge we just know is Schu dabbling in his psychosis. Loved the details of Tokyo burning - very grounding detail, cements the atmosphere beautifully.

DYED blond Yohji - :D.

I really liked the unapologetically evil Schu and Farf in the end! Excellent!

[wispykitty]

Why thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed all of that. I thought throwing Tokyo into a state of disarray would add nicely to the feel of the story.

Yohji does dye his hair, doesn't he? Or is he a natural blond? I always thought it was dyed. It's been so long since I was enough of a Yohji fan that I can't remember. *lol*

I love writing them as being unapologetically evil. It's much more fun!

[draelynnthered]

Long long ago I read fic (couldn't remember the title if I tried) that explained Yohji's un-Japanese features so well. Too tall, natural blond - half American army brat. Liked it so much I adopted it into my personal fanon.

Is he really a bottle blond in canon? Now I need to know!

[red_squared]

He has dark hair in the manga, so I've fanon-ed it as him having naturally dark hair, highlighting it in Kapitel and bleaching the life out of it in Gluehen.

Still. YOHJI NEEDZ MOAR BACKSTORY.