Creativity Blossoms

Mar 26, 2008 15:41

So I was sitting in class today and out of no where, music hits me! I wish I knew guitar so I can get it out of my head, cause I just know that I'm going to forget parts of it or it's not going to be as good as the first time, but oh well. Here, I'll write what I have so far. Just keep in mind it's a work in progress! This'll be a chronicle of the evolution of the song. What? Anyway, I'll just try to copy over what I have in my notebook right onto here:

Intro:
Guitar starts off, for two OR four measures, then the band joins in for another two

First Verse:
I still remember the time when I fell in your way
It makes its way through my thoughts most every day
I feel so lucky and blessed that I can hold you close
Cause I know what we're feeling is true and that it's better than most

Bridge to Chorus:
But why does it feel so strange?
Why does it make me weak?
It's like I can feel no pain
And I'm soaring above the streets [Go to Chorus 1]

Chorus 1:
You make me feel so good
When you walk through my door
You make me feel so good
It leaves me hanging on for more

Second Verse:
We get closer to each other every second, minute, day we're together
You're beauty and your sweetness makes me want to love you forever
I see you walking towards me, your face has a smile so wide
Nothing can ever hurt us because we've got love on our side

Bridge to Chorus:
But why does it feel so strange?
Why does it make me weak?
It's like I can feel no pain
And I'm soaring above the streets [Go to Chorus 2]

Chorus 2:
You make me feel so good
When you walk through my door
You make me feel so good
It leaves me hanging on for more
You make me feel so fine
You make me feel so... [Go to Solo, possible alternate bridge to solo]

Chorus 3:
You make me feel so good
When you walk through my door
You make me feel so good
It leaves me hanging on for more
You make me feel so fine
So fine
You make me feel so fine
I'm always feeling like it keeps me alive
It keeps me alive
You keep me alive
By making me feel so fine

In any case, I wish I had a guitar to write music with it. Tonight, Cliff is coming up and hopefully we can iron it out and turn it into another song of our catalog (hitting six right now!) For some reason, I feel...happy! And I don't want it to go away =)

--
Mike
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