*flails* Thank you so much for the detailed feedback! You're the best!
In my head I was working so hard on working and reworking the movement that by the time I was ready to post I wasn't sure how it would read. I'm so glad you had a visceral reaction to it! I love the idea of Elliot not making any moves Dean expects - disarming him with a kiss FTW!
Great story! I love Eliot's logic in disarming Dean. *g* If you want one tiny bit of concrit though, according to the official site it's "Eliot", not "Elliot". I love the story though!
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In my head I was working so hard on working and reworking the movement that by the time I was ready to post I wasn't sure how it would read. I'm so glad you had a visceral reaction to it! I love the idea of Elliot not making any moves Dean expects - disarming him with a kiss FTW!
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