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wedspawn

So Much Mine: Section Twenty-Two

Nov 26, 2006 19:56

Section Twenty-Two
There is small lemon...more of a kumquat really... in the third part of this section.

Pairing: JaeHo
Rating: Overall NC-17. This section HAS some sexual content.
Juk and Jaeho stirred by: RanaloreSummary: The beginning of a shifting relationship. Hot Korean boys. Sex. Dancing and some angry words. Not necessarily in that order. Not ( Read more... )

jaeho, smm 22

Comments 26

the_true_silver November 27 2006, 04:13:01 UTC

poor 'yuchun... i dont' think he saw that one coming.... and junsu isn't as angelic as we thought... hahah..

wedspawn November 27 2006, 04:52:30 UTC

muah-hah ha! ♥♥♥ and nope he didn't see it coming :)

i hope you liked it. :) ♥♥♥ thank you for reading!

faricsyung November 27 2006, 08:38:01 UTC

i didn't see it coming, neither. xD
i thought yoochunnie would've to confess/start something first.
lol. a lovely twist, thank you. *hearts*

gooooo 'su! *pats on shoulder* keke ~

my fave part would be where (a jealous) junsu asking yoochun about him kissing jaejoong. hahaha. that's too sweet. *loves*

and i love how yunho is being so gentle with jae, in terms of.. well, their whole relationship.

and stubborn!min amuses me greatly. such an interesting young man. xD

wedspawn November 27 2006, 15:32:28 UTC

♥♥♥ thank you! junsu kissing yoochun was a surprise to me too! :) we'll have to see where it goes in the yoosu piece :)

and yes, there is a bit of jealousy there :)

i'm glad you like the gentle yunho. jae needs gentle right now. and min is a riot. i adore him :)

thank you for reading! i appreciate it so much! ♥♥

cluvy November 27 2006, 10:42:31 UTC

THE YOOSU TOTALLY KILLED ME. <3

I love this section. I love how u finally focused one each character and used them in this chapter. ^^ am very happy. a rather happy and lighthearted section. very nice!

It must have been hard writing this section. good job!

wedspawn November 27 2006, 15:42:48 UTC

♥♥♥ thank you! it was a bit difficult because i had to balance everyone out. and make it a happy section. hardly any angst! ::::grins:;::

i'm glad the yoosu was well received. :) thank you for reading! i am glad you liked it! ♥♥♥

sweet_byk November 27 2006, 16:34:37 UTC

woaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa im starting to love yoosu now ^^

im glad that happiness is almost near everone now ^^

post more ^^

i hope there will be no problem from yunho parents

wedspawn November 27 2006, 16:41:11 UTC

:::: thank you! :::: i am glad the yoosu was liked!

there will be just a little bit more of the fic and then i'm done :) i hope you will enjoy it!

sidmaron May 9 2009, 19:06:46 UTC

YOOSUUUUUUUUUU! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥~
Muhahahaha~~~