So Much Mine: Section Four

[wedspawn]

Title: So Much Mine
Author: wedspawn
Genre: Slash/Relationship
Pairing: JaeHo
Rating: Eventually NC-17
Jaeho Pimpage and Beta: Ranalore
Summary: Section Four.
The beginning of a shifting relationship. Hot Korean boys. Sex. Dancing and some angry words. Not necessarily in that order. Not necessarily in each section.

Section One; Section Two; Section Three

Comments

[herokun]

The silence at the beginning of the section was great. It was so peaceful, serene, and safe; just like a family. Also, the boys cared about one another like members of a family. It’s really comfortable to read those things

[wedspawn]

i tried to capture jaejoong's complex simplicity. he is both wild and gentle so i tried to portray that in this chapter... to have yoochun see it and explain that to yunho. it does take yunnie a bit to get there and see it but he evetually does. :::grins:::

and yunho is definitely lost here. his world is changing and he's not quite sure what to do with it.

smooches. and thank you.

[sidmaron]

"... I’m sure he’ll feel happy knowing you were beside him as he slept."
Q___Q Really, I'm about to cry. This is amazing.

[wedspawn]

:::hugs;::: no crying. hugs hugs hugs.... snookies.

[jingeng]

“No, he’s not.” Micky agreed. “But I didn’t know that. I thought he was cold and narcissistic but in that moment when I felt my heart breaking because it was empty of the faces I loved, Jaejoong held my shoulders and told me that he would be my brother for as long as I needed him to be. That was when I began to know the real Jaejoong, Yunho.”

At this point my eyes were teary..

I believe I don't need to say anything more than that.
It's just beautiful

[wedspawn]

::::hugs:::: thank you.

for reading. :::snookies::::

[jingeng]

haha, no need to thank me dear =))
Thank you for writing it ^^ <3

[wedspawn]

:::::grins:::: heh.

[booger_lol_lol]

went silent for 2 chapters.. i'm sorry... i just couldn't stop reading..... it was soooooooooooooooooooooooo good... damn you make good fics.... you're unbelievable.. you are(x infinity) oh what i would do just to make a fic like yours...... you're goooooooooooooooooooood....

[wedspawn]

aw, thank you. i am very glad you like the fic. thank you for reading. :::bows deep:::: (knees crack and now i'm stuck). :::hobbles up:::: snookies. ah, SMM is much love.

[yummy_dreams]

Liked the Yoochun-Yunho discussion on Jaejoong's personality which really captured his complexity.

Like someone else said... what they discussed was very believable, and increases the plausibility of this story, making it have a naturalistic feel, even as the writing sometimes lapses into poetic prose. The content of their discussions makes the readers feel as though this was a reasonable and accurate representation of Jaejoong, not a contrived version.

[wedspawn]

when creating this universe, i tried to portray them as... people. flaws, and all. sometimes, things are black and white. for jaejoong, he was the most complicated but strangely the simplest. so much fun to write for. a great characterization. yunho unpeeling those layers... even more fun :D