2nd off! HOLY CRAP WHY DIDN'T YOU SAY SOMETHING ASDLCJASDORUASLFJASDORASDFK I JUST SAW THIS ON MY FRIENDS LIST!!
It's amazing how it's probably been months maybe a year since your last fic and I just feel like it's been yesterday. I fall effortlessly back into your writing like it's been nothing. I know I've been reading your actual writing but with yunjae it feels like yesterday. A bitter bitter yesterday.
HOW GORGEOUS WAS THIS? Why am I even surprised? 8D
I love the visual of everything in this. I WISH I COULD QUOTE IT ALL. The idea of Jaejoong being unsure of wanting to answer the phone, him on the floor, Yunho and Jaejoong back to back (or his hands on his shoulders) by the door. And the visual of roses, only rose petals. JUST SO MUCH SO MUCH.
It's this combination of you want them back together again, and even if you know that would be the WORST THING EVER for the both of them (and for the other three as well) you still desperately want Yunho to be able to come in and for Jaejoong to open the door. It's this desperation and when I read this line:
Then, in the rose-scented darkness, he heard the click of a latch being turned and the door behind him opened.
I nearly pulled my hair out!!! And then I thought to myself WHY AM I EVEN SURPRISED?????
Sobs I want Tiff to feel better but if this gets your churning out more Yunjae. TIFF YOU BETTER PRETEND YOUR SICK FOR A REALLY LONG TIME. 8DDDDD
No seriously, just nostalgic and beautifully written. It just keeps getting better I swear ♥♥♥♥
i was debating cross posting this but... meh, wasn't sure. i'll think about it later.
ah, yunjae. i dunno if i'm going to continue this one. i might just leave it right there. we will see. i needed to stretch my brain. :::laughs::: and well, yunjae... you know they are like a comfortable old tshirt.
Ah the roses. i needed there to be roses. they made so much sense. :::hugs::: smoooooches and hugs and kisses. ♥
2nd off! HOLY CRAP WHY DIDN'T YOU SAY SOMETHING ASDLCJASDORUASLFJASDORASDFK I JUST SAW THIS ON MY FRIENDS LIST!!
It's amazing how it's probably been months maybe a year since your last fic and I just feel like it's been yesterday. I fall effortlessly back into your writing like it's been nothing. I know I've been reading your actual writing but with yunjae it feels like yesterday. A bitter bitter yesterday.
HOW GORGEOUS WAS THIS? Why am I even surprised? 8D
I love the visual of everything in this. I WISH I COULD QUOTE IT ALL. The idea of Jaejoong being unsure of wanting to answer the phone, him on the floor, Yunho and Jaejoong back to back (or his hands on his shoulders) by the door. And the visual of roses, only rose petals. JUST SO MUCH SO MUCH.
It's this combination of you want them back together again, and even if you know that would be the WORST THING EVER for the both of them (and for the other three as well) you still desperately want Yunho to be able to come in and for Jaejoong to open the door. It's this desperation and when I read this line:
Then, in the rose-scented darkness, he heard the click of a latch being turned and the door behind him opened.
I nearly pulled my hair out!!! And then I thought to myself WHY AM I EVEN SURPRISED?????
Sobs I want Tiff to feel better but if this gets your churning out more Yunjae. TIFF YOU BETTER PRETEND YOUR SICK FOR A REALLY LONG TIME. 8DDDDD
No seriously, just nostalgic and beautifully written. It just keeps getting better I swear ♥♥♥♥
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feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeel bettter okay ;_______;
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i was debating cross posting this but... meh, wasn't sure. i'll think about it later.
ah, yunjae. i dunno if i'm going to continue this one. i might just leave it right there. we will see. i needed to stretch my brain. :::laughs::: and well, yunjae... you know they are like a comfortable old tshirt.
Ah the roses. i needed there to be roses. they made so much sense. :::hugs::: smoooooches and hugs and kisses. ♥
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