Chapter 20 - Under the sway of thy gentle wings

Nov 25, 2009 23:50

Jaejoong watched in wonder as his breath blew out in little crystallized puffs, a hazy mist of minute snowflakes that trailed away on the winters wind. The full force of winters hand had come down upon them, enclosing them within her bitter arctic grip. A spurned lover, torn harshly away from the warm embrace of her love, she raged with all her ( Read more... )

pairing: yunho/jaejoong, author: w, under the willow tree, genre: angst, pairing: yoochun/junsu

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wednesday92p November 25 2009, 15:52:53 UTC
SPOT FOR TING5 AND EKIN_HARDY (^_^)

im sorry, this chapter is kinda short?? i dunno, i feel abit fail right now.. :(

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ting5 November 26 2009, 00:05:36 UTC
aww dont be...love the fact they are out together at their precious willow tree..seems Yunjae is progressing quite well..poor Min though i think both of his hyung must have scared him so at that moment but i think once he has food he'll recover LOL

Being a Yoosu-shipper i just love their moment together, i love to read the love they have for each other ^^

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wednesday92p November 26 2009, 06:52:11 UTC
yay i read you loving comment on my bdae! feels more surreal? hahaha, thankks, im a yoosu lover myself so whenever i write about them, its just too awwww~ yoosu is full of sweet, spice and everything nice.. yunjae is more darker i feel, but all the more beautiful.. (^_^)

ah well, the fic is gonna end pretty soon :( im hoping the last chap will be a mind blowing close to this wonderful little story. hehe hopefully~

anyways, thanks for reading!! im gonna miss you~ *hugs*

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ting5 November 26 2009, 12:42:06 UTC
OMG i'm a failure..it slipped frm my mind...hope i'm nt too late in wiching you a happy birthday gal and for you to enjoy your party...

gosh still cant believe i forgot :( pls forgive me?! I think doing the uni transfer stuff has clog my brain anyway enough abt me, it's your day just enjoy it *huggles*

P.S. Looking forward to the nxt chap

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ekin_hardy November 26 2009, 05:05:18 UTC
Tanx for the spot bb~~

Tis is wat u call short? Nah~~

but I believe dat u hv bring ur writing to another level...its more like i sense it...

I continuously love it,, how u potray dat 5 of them hv this special connection between tem but deeper than that Yunjae and Yoosu has the invisible thread to their hearts...*gets bricked by Minnie's fan*

cant wait for more development in this...<3

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wednesday92p November 26 2009, 06:55:33 UTC
hehehe thanks, i love the way you said that about yunjae and yoosu!! ^^

huhuhuhu, poor min.. hes gonna get scolded by umma~

hmm, dont really understand that part though, sorry.. is it 'i believe you have TO bring your writing to another level' or ' that you have Brought your writing to another level' ? hehe sorry im abit confused~

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ekin_hardy November 26 2009, 07:27:05 UTC
my grammar......*red-faced*

'brought' is the correct word...

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