We were wondering if you could provide a couple things:
A) A more detailed section on her personality--we weren't really able to understand how or if it deviates from canon, and will need to do so in order to judge the application properly in an AU setting, as well as
B) A second sample. We feel your sample was more of an extension of her AU history rather than a grasp of her voice. It's important to remember that Webscape is an online virtual chatroom, so character voice is very important in judging applications.
Thank you for applying at Webscape and thank you for complying with our requests.
I'm sorry, but based on your samples, it's hard to get a clear understanding of how you see Yoko, and how you will play her. It's hard to understand her motivation or voice and we really can't judge without knowing that that. We also feel that, from the Dear_Mun entry and comments, you understand her on a surface level, but you miss several points of her character beyond that. There are couple of things that don't match up between your history and samples/personality that we'd ask you to look into should you re-apply.
After much consideration, we have decided to deny this application, however, feel free to try again.
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A) A more detailed section on her personality--we weren't really able to understand how or if it deviates from canon, and will need to do so in order to judge the application properly in an AU setting, as well as
B) A second sample. We feel your sample was more of an extension of her AU history rather than a grasp of her voice. It's important to remember that Webscape is an online virtual chatroom, so character voice is very important in judging applications.
Thank you for applying at Webscape and thank you for complying with our requests.
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After much consideration, we have decided to deny this application, however, feel free to try again.
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