A measure of Sacrifice (4/8)

[rawthornewrites]

Title: A Measure of Sacrifice (4/8)
Authors: butterflyweb and rawthornewrites
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: GD/Top, BaeRi
Warnings: Character death, violence
Summary: Seunghyun passes out at 8:14, Seoul time. By the time he wakes, at 10:32, the fifty-six Allied Military outposts on Earth and eleven out of fifteen satellites in space have been blown to smithereens.
Author's Note:

Comments

[l2inl2in]

I don't know why but this makes twice that by the time I get to read one chapter another has been posted so I'm sorry for commenting on two chapters at once.

Chapter 3 ~ The concept of TOP getting topped is something I hear getting tossed around alot but don't really see used very much but with Jiyong and Seung's characters being who they are you somehow sidestepped every pitfall and cliche that surrounds a dominant person being...well for lack of a better word 'dominated'. XD I sound like a moron but I mean it! It was tender and sweet but just feral enough to stay true to the couple you've built and the circumstances.

Chapter 4 ~ Brutally honest time.....For some reason Chaerin's presence just rubs me the wrong way. It's really hard for me to explain but I think it's got alot to do with having to deal with vag all the sudden. Even though I kind of know in my gut that you wouldn't do it to us I'm just waiting for one of the boys to fall for her. It's just one of those annoying plot things I've come to expect from fan fiction. For some reason the entrance of a female character always means trouble XD
But you know it might just be that we're not supposed to like her yet.
...this just occurred to me. -.-;;;;

Long comments are long sorry! It just means that I love your work and it makes me think. Honestly there are a million other things that I loved in these two glorious chapters but I'm shutting up.

PS: Dae is AWESOME!!!!! <3

[rawthornewrites]

We're quick little worker bees. ;) We're very glad chapter 3 worked for you. An integral part of the GTOP relationship here is that they're trying to take care of each other and in this particular instance, it was Jiyong's turn to take care of his lover.

We're sorry Chaerin doesn't work for you yet. It's always a challenge to introduce a female character to a slashfic. It's also true that so far she has been less than pleasant. We hope she'll grow on you a little in future chapters!

Thank you so much for the long but awesome comment. And for loving Dae. Chapter 5 should be up soon!