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May 01, 2012 07:06


Title: Push
Fandom: Eureka
Characters: Jack and Nathan (indirectly Allison)
Prompt: #008 - Push.
Rating: M (for themes)
Warnings: Character Death
Word Count: 332
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comm: 20_fics, fandom: eureka, character: jack carter, character: nathan stark, rated: m, character: allison blake, length: under 500 words, #fanfiction

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xfirefly9x May 1 2012, 01:33:12 UTC
Ouuch. Poor boys. And Aly. :(
Nicely written.

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wearestarrdust May 1 2012, 11:05:17 UTC
Thanks.
Eureka seems to one of the easiest thing's for me to write :)

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xfirefly9x May 1 2012, 13:00:28 UTC
:)
Noticed you do it a lot, but... thing's.. no need for the apostrophe. Should just be 'things'. ;)

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wearestarrdust May 1 2012, 19:05:42 UTC
Yeah me and spelling and grammar aren't such good friends. I like to think I'm down with the obvious but thank for letting me know I'll watch the "things" in future :) Niiice picture by the way.

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xfirefly9x May 2 2012, 03:18:54 UTC
Eh.. well, you seem to have a good grasp on the basics and write stuff that makes sense. :P A step up from many others I've seen, who can barely grasp sentence structure in some cases.

The thing's vs things bit.. have noticed you do that with other words too. Remind me and I'll try and teach you where to use apostrophes. Or.. there's this link for now.

Tbh, it's the biggest issue I've seen in your stuff, grammar-wise, so if you can get a grasp on that, you're pretty much good. :)

(Sorry. Editor in me sometimes takes over. Hope I'm not being too... anything with this.)

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wearestarrdust May 2 2012, 05:29:23 UTC
No, definitly not being annoying or anything at all. The more critique the better IMO, and I respect your oppinion more than most so that helps. I guess at some point I should actually sit down and learn grammar that I ignored in high-school :)

Often for me, when it comes to grammar and spelling - I do it how I think it looks right, not what is right.

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xfirefly9x May 2 2012, 07:03:33 UTC
Glad to hear it. :)
Yeah, possibly good to look into it.

That's generally what I used to do as well. Got most of it right. But there are some things that are just a little bit more tricky, so.. :)

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wearestarrdust May 2 2012, 07:16:19 UTC
Hehe, yeah. I'd have to look into it soon put it on my big to-do list! :D

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xfirefly9x May 2 2012, 07:16:58 UTC
Sounds good :)

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