In nobody's eyes but mine, pt. 5
Panic at the Disco, Ryan/Brendon/Brittany*. Explicit. In progress. ~7,000 words. Etc.
previous parts all tagged here. (i am really obsessed with this song right now.
the cliks/complicated [sendspace])
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fuck your pain away )
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I wish there was more than just one part left because everything about this story is so perfect. Somehow each chapter ends up being more amazing than the last.
The way that you can show the characters motivations as being subtle while the sex is still so fucking hot and so very not subtle impresses me immensely. Like, in this chapter, how Brendon was kind of mirroring Brittany's actions leaning against the wall and lying on the bed did not go unnoticed but it also did not detract from what was actually going on.
I will be excitedly awaiting the final part, while reading the other parts again many times I'm sure.
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"Use your own hand then, rock star" made me giggle and snicker and oh that is SO going in the lexicon.
what the fuck are they even doing, why have they spent one minute acting like this isn't what they wanted all along.
Umph. Exactly.
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I am also in awe at how well you manage to show the confusion and how everything develops.
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