fic: In nobody's eyes but mine, pt. 5

May 05, 2008 11:18

In nobody's eyes but mine, pt. 5
Panic at the Disco, Ryan/Brendon/Brittany*. Explicit. In progress. ~7,000 words. Etc.

previous parts all tagged here.

(i am really obsessed with this song right now. the cliks/complicated [sendspace])

fuck your pain away )

hey shut up, tightpants, fic

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wearemany May 9 2008, 01:39:43 UTC
thank you -- also fucking christ on a pogo stick! yay!

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nyquil_love May 5 2008, 20:31:27 UTC
I got so excited when I saw this. It was ridiculous.
=)

I wish there was more than just one part left because everything about this story is so perfect. Somehow each chapter ends up being more amazing than the last.

The way that you can show the characters motivations as being subtle while the sex is still so fucking hot and so very not subtle impresses me immensely. Like, in this chapter, how Brendon was kind of mirroring Brittany's actions leaning against the wall and lying on the bed did not go unnoticed but it also did not detract from what was actually going on.

I will be excitedly awaiting the final part, while reading the other parts again many times I'm sure.

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wearemany May 9 2008, 01:40:27 UTC
thank you for noticing all the little nuances of this (and the other chapters). so glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for letting me know.

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hearthisvoice May 5 2008, 21:11:51 UTC
There are so many great things happening here...I don't even know where or what to articulate. Amazing, hot, HOT sex.

"Use your own hand then, rock star" made me giggle and snicker and oh that is SO going in the lexicon.

what the fuck are they even doing, why have they spent one minute acting like this isn't what they wanted all along.

Umph. Exactly.

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wearemany May 9 2008, 01:40:56 UTC
yay! lexicon, indeed.

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strongplacebo May 5 2008, 22:06:40 UTC
This is, once again, so insanely hot.

I am also in awe at how well you manage to show the confusion and how everything develops.

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wearemany May 9 2008, 01:41:37 UTC
thank you very much! (I love that icon, btw. they look so smug!)

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murklins May 5 2008, 22:51:46 UTC
Ugh, so amazing. I recced this series over here.

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jaden_reads May 5 2008, 23:12:30 UTC
This series is so brilliant. I can honestly see it having gone down exactly like this.

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wearemany May 9 2008, 01:42:33 UTC
oh, thanks, that's a huge compliment!

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wearemany May 9 2008, 01:42:06 UTC
aww, thanks for the rec. glad you've enjoyed, and thanks for letting me know!

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