Bill and Gustav! Gustav and Bill! And aw- I can definitely see Bill sitting on Tom's feet and watching and eating gummi sweets and never breaking a sweat. Except for when he's on stage. Stick-insect body! You have such an incredible way with words. Its like you're writing a story within a story, with the subtle lines you insert.
I lol so much at your humor, thank you.
And oh yes, wishes. Next chapter! Which Tom will be written about first?
Gustav ♥ Thank you so much, it means a lot to me that you'd say that because I have all these mini backstories in my head while I write and so many of them only ever appear as a tiny glimpse. I'm happy you enjoyed the tidbits of story-in-story :)
Re: next chapter, Tom's perspective carries throughout, and I've taken turns with it so next up is bb!Tom again :)
Hehe--the boys are so much fun :D And aaaaaaaaw, Gustav <3333 Ouch--Tom's gonna have a headache when he comes "back to the future" And poor lil'Tom is gonna get wet :(
Wonderful update! This chp was great! Is this line perhaps a mention of a certain rapper which lusts after Bill: “Where I’m from, you like German rappers.” ????
Furzry is right- you have a wonderful way with words...I could totally imagine Bill sitting on Tom's feet eating Gummy worms...and having them all gang up on each other was great- and having them all looking at Tom's body was a lovely touch- though when Georg gets muscles Tom will have competition...Lol!
I am sad there is only two chps left- very sad indeed...however i hope you do decide to do more from this verse.
Haha, yeah - Bill likes German rappers in the future, all right ;)
Thank you for your continued interest. I saw you left reviews on THF too, that's so sweet that you'd put them over there too :) I'm pretty sure there'll be more fic in this universe, and I have some other stuff lined up too...boy, I'm going to be busy :)
I hope you do more- this is a wonderful world you have going on. You really should explore it more...you should maybe do a little fourshot where the members of the band get to met a past version- so for example....
1/ Bill and Bill 2/Tom and Tom 3/Georg and little Gustav 4/Gustav and little Georg
That was so awesome. So bloody awesome! :-D And Gustav, eh? Having a crush, hmm? ;-D Such a wonderful chapter. Two wishes down... I wonder what will happen now? ;-)
Hehe, we haven't seen the last of Gustav or his crush - I'll be writing more of that when I find the time. Thank you for reading. Two wishes down, and the next chapter is up :)
I LOVED this chapter. The carefree atmosphere at the lake, the boy's awe in fornt of Tom's muscle (lol), Bill singing in the rain... And I think they're finally getting back where they belong so yay!
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I lol so much at your humor, thank you.
And oh yes, wishes. Next chapter! Which Tom will be written about first?
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Re: next chapter, Tom's perspective carries throughout, and I've taken turns with it so next up is bb!Tom again :)
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Ouch--Tom's gonna have a headache when he comes "back to the future" And poor lil'Tom is gonna get wet :(
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Yup, headaches and icky wet clothes :) Tom's got to suffer a little more before it ends, hehe.
Thanks for reading ♥
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Furzry is right- you have a wonderful way with words...I could totally imagine Bill sitting on Tom's feet eating Gummy worms...and having them all gang up on each other was great- and having them all looking at Tom's body was a lovely touch- though when Georg gets muscles Tom will have competition...Lol!
I am sad there is only two chps left- very sad indeed...however i hope you do decide to do more from this verse.
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Thank you for your continued interest. I saw you left reviews on THF too, that's so sweet that you'd put them over there too :) I'm pretty sure there'll be more fic in this universe, and I have some other stuff lined up too...boy, I'm going to be busy :)
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1/ Bill and Bill
2/Tom and Tom
3/Georg and little Gustav
4/Gustav and little Georg
You could obvously play around with others too...
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And I think they're finally getting back where they belong so yay!
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