Coming Home

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Title: Coming Home
Recipient: Daegaer
Author: vr2lbast
Rating:PG-13
Summary: Nagi/Schuldig. Light romance.
Notes: Possible spoilers.

Comments

[daegaer]

Eee, thank you, I love this!

"A souvenir?" Schuldig said. "You shouldn't have."

*snerk*

"I'm not going to find anyone else like her," Nagi said.

That, at least, was an accurate assessment, Schuldig decided.

Ahahahahaha! Oh, Schuldig, you were surprisingly tactful in not saying that aloud . . .

Thank you again, mystery writer!

[lady_ganesh]

That was win, especially the last section-- but what a wonderful build-up!

[mainekosama]

This really worked! I think it's tough to write those two convincingly, but you made it smooth and natural. I loved the scene in the second part, with confusion about "sleeping together", computer-spying Naygi and the uniqueness of Tot.

Besides, it was a truly nice study of Nagi growing up.

[dormouse_in_tea]

I really liked this. Both the focus of it, and how it ties into my own personal obsessions. . . this is one of the few times I've seen Mamoru written with any evidence of Omi-personality where I didn't want to throw things! I like your take on the character. :)

[purkledragon]

Very nice, love the progression from meeting to the end