Something In Common Part One

[jsherlock]

Author: jsherlock
Rating: PG
Title: Untitled
Part: 1/?
Warnings: None for now.
Disclaimer: I do not own anything that belongs to DC and Time Warner/AOL.

Summary: Six years later Crane is released and gets a new job.

How far the mighty have fallen, the young man thought as he watched the city flash by through the train window.

Who said you were

Comments

[stranj100]

This is good. It fills me with anticipation.

[jsherlock]

Wow, that was FAST.

Thank you for that assessment. Anything you liked specifically?

[stranj100]

It's hard for me to be specific from just the first part, but I do like the over all feel.

[jsherlock]

Ok, then. The feel is good. I was going for broken, but hopeful kind of feel.

I'm working on the next installment, so hopefully it will be smoother than this one; there are parts of this that are so...rough it makes me cringe. But I was editing it to death, so I posted.

[tiggothy]

Oooh, I like :-) Looking forward to how this develops :-)

[wc_for_dinner]

Wow. This is very good, I like it. It's an interesting idea, actually rehabilitating Crane with his past behavior even before the insanity. :D I like how he thinks he's talking to himself and she mentions it could just be his sense of humor. LOL, priceless. I think you captured the emotions very well, and it didn't feel dry at all to me, just what I would expect from Crane at this point.

[jsherlock]

Thank you! I love writing these little lines. They're so much fun.

[xzombiexkittenx]

Not sure how I managed to miss this altogether (especially since there are so many parts...) but I'm certainly going to continue. I like the premise.