Comments | waxrose: A very blustery day

waxrose

A very blustery day

Oct 07, 2005 17:39

Written for theleapingmuse, as part of xylodemon's I Didn't Get To Go To TWH Ficlet-a-thon.

wind slowly earthward | Remus/James | 450 words

( The October wind numbs his ears and howls past his head with teeth-chattering ferocity, but all Remus can feel is the phantom touch of cold, callused fingertips on his cheek and the warm press of chapped lips that is all too fast fading into distant memory. )

drabbles, harry potter

Comments 34

theleapingmuse October 7 2005, 23:04:32 UTC

Nevermind, I got in a different way. *runs off to read*

waxrose October 7 2005, 23:05:16 UTC

Excellent!

theleapingmuse October 7 2005, 23:11:19 UTC

This is..That was..James and Remus..and the words, and the imagery..and the IMAGERY..

I'm speechless. This is amazing, love. Brilliant and sweet and exactly what I was thinking when I posted the request.

You did a fantastic job. FanTASTIC. XD

♥

waxrose October 7 2005, 23:17:53 UTC

OMG, thanks! I <3 you. You are totally my new best friend and QaF twin! *huggles*

fidgetknickers October 7 2005, 23:51:18 UTC

This is lovely. And especially given the time you've written it in - I'm gobsmacked. My mouth honestly watered at 'Apples make loud, satisfying crunches and the juice dribbles down his chin like a benediction.'

I'm never going to be able to wear a scarf again without burying my nose in it and thinking of this. I have a perfect picture of it in my head to add to all my favourite autumn/fall memories.

waxrose October 8 2005, 16:37:59 UTC

Mmmmm, fall. Best season ever! Thank you very much! <3

inocciduous October 7 2005, 23:57:38 UTC

Eep! How loverly!

Remus/James is my new favorite and there's such a lack of good stories like this.

This is ... marvelous :)

waxrose October 8 2005, 16:38:24 UTC

Awww, thank you! *blush* I really enjoyed writing this.

noticeably October 8 2005, 00:17:20 UTC

On Christmas, he has a new, thick woolen scarf, warm and vibrantly coloured. But it is James’s kisses that sear the frosty winter cold away, secret and wonderful and real long after the last leaf has fallen.

Oh, this is gorgeous! Just, yes. I loved every word of it. :)

waxrose October 8 2005, 16:39:10 UTC

Thaaaaank you! - and thank you also for taking my prompt! I've had a craving for some Sirius/James. :P