[ficlet] three thousand worlds in one instant (ohmiya)

Mar 21, 2008 20:38

three thousand worlds in one instant
for tohshimari
~850 words | PG | Ohmiya (Ohno/Nino)| Johnny's Entertainment - Arashi RPS
A/N: I've been thinking about Tendai Buddhism and interpenetrating realities for my Japanese Religions final all day. I'm sorry that this strayed from your request quite a bit, tohshimari. I hope that it's still okay! Set a couple of years ( Read more... )

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klena March 22 2008, 02:33:45 UTC
O-o...oh

Ohno has forgotten, somehow, in the past few months, Nino. He knows the curve of his smile and the cartography of his face, the way he spoke and laughed and grew serious. But they were somehow fragments, jewel-bright sparks of something larger that Ohno hadn't even realized he was really without until he saw Nino's slumped shoulders and unshaven chin

♥ ♥ ♥

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waxrose March 23 2008, 06:16:15 UTC
*holds your hand* ♥

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klena March 26 2008, 05:46:19 UTC
Oh honey I can't tell you how much I loved this

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thawrecka March 22 2008, 02:40:05 UTC
Oh, this is just lovely. I just love the description and the feeling and the OTPy goodness.

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waxrose March 23 2008, 06:17:09 UTC
Thanks! :) They really just are too cute together. I think all of my Ohmiya fic is doomed to be smooshy as all hell.

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moeruze_burning March 22 2008, 04:28:30 UTC
:>>>>>>>> <--- My facial expression right now, only more wibbly.

UWAH! OH-CHAN! NINO! *FLAIL* Separating them is like, separating a fish from water.

I'm very incoherent right now, but ;oifdhgaofihg;dofig ♥♥♥

ILU x 90000000!!!!!

I don't even remember what my request was.

rth;osrthirt IT'S SO CUTE. SERIOUSLY, IT MAKES ME HAPPY AND SLEEPY AND TEARY EYED AND FLAILY.

<3 I have so many favorite parts. But this line got to me: He wants to tell him about the gaping limbo of blank space between goodbye and now, choreography for four instead of five and seeing Nino outside of his own mind for the first time in what felt like an age, for an instant that was both transitory and eternal.

Mostly the "four instead of five" thing, because I'm big on having all five, just one, just two, or just three. No four. It's sad when there's one left out.

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waxrose March 23 2008, 06:18:53 UTC
Glad you liked! I think you said something about "pantsing" and I was going for humor, but then this idea just struck me and I had to write it out. It seemd to have worked out. :D ♥

Mostly the "four instead of five" thing, because I'm big on having all five, just one, just two, or just three. No four. It's sad when there's one left out.

The Kitto Daijoubu live performances without Nino are just too sad. They really aren't complete unless they're all together. :(((

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moeruze_burning March 23 2008, 16:55:37 UTC
: D It worked out Wonderfully. <3

Even the bus trip up to training camp on Mago Mago Arashi, was sad without their Diva. :( I was all "If only Diva-san was there. Think of how they could piss him off so easily this way!" XD

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kegom March 22 2008, 04:52:03 UTC
Very beautiful! I liked the meditative feeling of it, it fit in well with the situation and really brought across the feeling of "wholeness" Ohmiya have together. ^-^

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waxrose March 23 2008, 06:25:27 UTC
Thank you! It was a bit of a different piece than usual for me, but I thoroughly enjoyed writing it. ♥

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aeslis March 22 2008, 05:15:28 UTC
This was really, really good. It's stuff like this that makes me love written word.

And Ohmiya too, of course. ♥

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waxrose March 23 2008, 06:24:17 UTC
I think I struggled a bit with that in this, how to convey an essentially deep emotion in an understandable way that sort of recalls your own experiences with that same feeling. I-I hope it worked a little, at least. :D

And Ohmiya. :D Thank you! ♥

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