LJ Idol, week 2: Throw back the small ones

Jan 31, 2013 18:05


It's a beautiful day in Ocarr, hot and bright and humid and wet. That's what happens in summer, when your city squats right next to the ocean and the day is cloudless: all your clothes stick to you and you feel miserable and icky. Like I said, beautiful.

Its beautiful if you dress light for the weather, like me. It's beautiful if your light ( Read more... )

via ljapp, week 2, lj idol

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jenny_evergreen February 1 2013, 19:10:57 UTC
LOVE IT.

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jem0000000 February 2 2013, 06:56:20 UTC
Nice! I like this. :)

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baxaphobia February 3 2013, 02:23:26 UTC
Oh this was great! And a happy ending!

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myrna_bird February 3 2013, 23:08:23 UTC
I love this story with a little Robin Hood flavor. I'm smiling right along with the thieving girl!

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halfshellvenus February 4 2013, 02:09:23 UTC
This is really terrific! It has such a tangible mood and setting, and uses the prompt really well. It's a nice tale, a complete moment in the life of someone who has still somehow held onto a little bit of humanity despite how the world treats her.

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