Thanks! I just had this idea in my mind of forests and magic and love as a tree...and the poem sprang from there. Ideally, I'd like the rhythm to be a lot cleaner, and I don't like the chorus that I have right now, but it was late at night; I didn't go to bed until 3:30am. I spent pretty much all last night just chiseling away at it. Like I said, I haven't written in FOREVER so I needed to write something down! I just wanted to finish it, and maybe I'll refine it later. I'd welcome any comments to that end! Also: you write good poetry, miss submitted-a-book-of-poems-to-a-contest! So you *can* write! But thanks for the encouragement! <3
Well, the images you had must have been lovely ones because the poem that came out of it all is very lovely. <3 I can look over it again if you'd like some con. crit.
And pffft, just because I can write doesn't mean that I don't wish I'd written what you did! ;P
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I encourage artful writing. Hooray for inspiration!
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On another note: whoo Old Blind Dogs! <3
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Also: you write good poetry, miss submitted-a-book-of-poems-to-a-contest! So you *can* write! But thanks for the encouragement! <3
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And pffft, just because I can write doesn't mean that I don't wish I'd written what you did! ;P
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