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watertailfish

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Feb 26, 2011 01:26

that's just the way we roll
6364; pg-13
krystal/luna; f(x)

a/n: my entry for themedpop's mv challenge. a big thanks to permutate for being my beta :)♥ the music video used was shinee's a.mi.go, and the title was taken from the jonas brothers' song of the same name. cross-posted to unniefic and mrboogie.

( “might wanna be a little more careful there, can’t have you falling into people’s laps all the time.” )

pairing: krystal/luna, group: f(x), rating: pg-13

Comments 4

g_odalisque13 February 25 2011, 21:49:26 UTC

this was so sweet!
i love how their relationship developed throughout the whole story and all of the subtleties that hint at more than friendship.
i don't i've ever read this pairing before, but you made it work really well. it's also nice to read luna b/c i feel like she isn't in many fanfictions.
i really enjoyed this :)

jasmine_1010 February 27 2011, 22:46:51 UTC

-flails-

HOW DID YOU WRITE THIS SO PERFECTLYYYY~??? No but seriously. I was craving something and this fit the bill exactly. So sweet, I went 'aww' when Krystal was being all protective. <3333

I DIDN'T WANT THIS TO END. I kept on reading the paragraphs over because I didn't want to finish reading it. D:

orenmanida March 4 2011, 02:16:07 UTC

this is the sweetest thing ever. the progression was seriously perfect ♥ thank you for sharing!! :)

orenmanida March 4 2011, 02:19:27 UTC

also, i really loved the incorporation of onew and iu and amber -- really great characterization :) and i like that neither one of them (krystal and luna) seemed to be crushing on the other right away... the relationship evolved so naturally. your writing is so matter-of-fact, but the words you choose are really evocative! i would like to read more of your writing now, hehe.