Fic: Tension Causes Friction (The Potential For More) (Jared/Jensen, NC-17)

[waterofthemoon]

Title: Tension Causes Friction (The Potential For More)

Comments

[linda3m]

This is great! The sex is hot and desperate, but the aftermath is so cute and sweet and funny!

[waterofthemoon]

Thank you! I figured Jared wouldn't let Jensen brood too much after. :P

[waterofthemoon]

HEEEEE. Jared is so mean to poor Jensen's libido!

[salixbabylon]

OMG the porny goodness! *wallows in it* Thank you, thank you!

It's alsways the litle details and vivid phrases that get me, that make it seem real - too confused and desperate for much finesse, the rough catch of Jared's zipper against his throat, Jared on him and in him and around him.

Jen, coming in his jeans just from sucking jared off? Just... WOW. HOttest thing *ever*.

This was brilliant! thank you so much. :)

[waterofthemoon]

Yaaaaaayyyyyy, you're very welcome! I'm so glad you liked it! \o/ And I'm glad those details worked for you--I really wanted it to feel "in the moment."

Jensen LOVES Jared's cock. He wants to write odes to it. :P

[salixbabylon]

Don't we all... :)

Thank you again!

[lynnmonster]

Good lord, this was *incredibly* hot.

[waterofthemoon]

Thank you! :D

[joygoddess]

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm very nice. Loved how it started out hot and frantic and than the banter afterwards, hilarious. The perfect combination. Great story. Hugs!

[waterofthemoon]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! I don't think I could stop those boys from bantering if I tried. :P