Fic: Hard To Breathe (I Can Feel Your Heartbeat Through My Skin) (unrequited Jared/Jensen, R)

[waterofthemoon]

Title: Hard To Breathe (I Can Feel Your Heartbeat Through My Skin)

Comments

[altiloquent]

Oh, man. Oh, MAN. This is so PERFECT. It's paced so perfectly and the details are wonderful and that last line is just THE perfect kick. Fabulous, babes!

[quarterwhore]

Jared is so worth waiting for, so I'm glad that Jensen is patient... The longing and need in this fic hurts, but in such a good way, you know? Or am I just a masochist like that? Haha... but hon, in all seriousness, I think a little piece of my heart broke off and crumbled into ashes.

Part of me-- a HUGE part of me-- is tempted to crawl on my knees and beg for more, even though the open ending is painfully gorgeous just the way it is. I mean, I'd love to see more of this, but at the same time... I'm willing to wait for more, even if it means waiting forever! *grin* Great job hon!

-Allie

[iwwfw]

This is that perfect quiet piece that just tucks its way into a tiny corner in your heart and then warms your entire being.

[zortified]

Awwwww. And whoohoo! :-) I like this very much. Thank you!

[certainthings]

Oh, this was beautiful and perfect and bittersweet and and sigh.

doesn't know, doesn't know.

I like the repetition of that.