In the Leyline of Fire (6 of 7?) - part 2

[watch_yer_back]

6. (Continued...)

I watched Ivy approach with a long-legged stride that dozens of models would probably kill for. The glimmering of light from a street lamp somewhere and the fading night sky was enough for me to see her by.

Her robe furled around her, a silken blue so dark as to be almost black, the color of deep oceans. I’d always put the

Comments

[sav8801]

I'm in awe. I knew you were good, but this is ridiculous. I don't even know where to begin.

Ivy at the piano? Loved it.

Ivy's grand plan? Blown the hell away.

Ivy and Rachel making up? Awwwwww X infinity :D

Final line? Damn straight 130 years is not enough.

That was awesome. You delivered like... something that really, REALLY delivers. Sorry, the awesomeness is giving me a case of the dumb. I'll come up with a better metaphor once my brain reboots. *brain crashes again from awesomeness* uhm... better not hold your breath for that.

[starbuckjr]

I second all you say. My brain is so beyond repair...

Just... wow.

[watch_yer_back]

I hope that's in a good way. ;) Thanks!

[watch_yer_back]

Lol I hope your brain reboots soon! This chapter gave me a lot of trouble because first, I was writing for an audience with high expectations (*grumble*), and second, it had to be at least as good as chapter 5. Just so people wouldn't think I was completely mean. :P But also because I wanted the making up to be as good, if not better, than the kicking out part

[tifftails88]

all of this ^^. i no longer want to hide away in a corner making unhuman noises and wanting to kill myself. i think i love you again babe. i cant wait till the update

[watch_yer_back]

Thanks! Glad I'm back in your good graces, and that you're not hiding in a corner anymore. :)