Pre-Syncope

Oct 07, 2010 23:58

Title: Pre-Syncope
Fandom: Fringe
Character(s): Olivia Dunham, Peter Bishop (Olivia/Peter)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Olivia struggles with her feelings of helplessness. Newton encounters an unexpected development in his mission.
Notes: Wrote this for girlsavesboyfic. This fic takes place after 2x13 What Lies Below but before 2x15 Jacksonville. There are hints at ( Read more... )

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wasabi_girl1 October 8 2010, 08:06:11 UTC
Thank you bb! :) Aspects of the fic are similar to the show and some parts are just...not. :P But I very much appreciate the sentiment! <3

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hollywoodgrrl October 8 2010, 13:05:30 UTC
D: Did I just watch read a brand new episode of Fringe?! Because it sure felt that way! It felt like a spec script, dude. This is fantastic! You even included the Observers!!!

“Then I guess it’s time for the winner to get her prize…a tickle attack!”
This made me LOL irl. Just saying! Nothing beats the cuteness of Aunt Liv interacting with Ella. ;D I could literally see Anna acting this scene. ♥

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wasabi_girl1 October 8 2010, 13:18:13 UTC
Aww ILU right now for saying it was like an episode script. <3 I also love your icon, omg epic!! :D

Hee, I love Olivia's scenes with Ella, they show us such a different side of her as a person, it's wonderful. :)

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hollywoodgrrl October 8 2010, 13:32:32 UTC
It read like one! So that just means you have to write (me) more Fringe fic! :P

Hee! The BAMF Olympics picture is like the greatest thing to ever happen to this show. :D

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wasabi_girl1 October 8 2010, 13:39:33 UTC
Definitely want to write more in the future! :) Don't know if you do Yuletide but I'm totally going to nominate, request and write Fringe. \o/

If there was a BAMF Olympics Olivia would win gold in every single event. ;)

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wasabi_girl1 October 8 2010, 14:40:17 UTC
Thank you. :)

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killmotion October 8 2010, 22:30:36 UTC
I loved this! I love it when things tie in later and foreshadowing is one of my favorite things.
I have a theory that the Observers made the machine a long time ago in a third (yellow) universe...which I assume is where they originate from. And they used it once (before they got into the Observe Only mentality) and afterwards they realized the destructiveness of it was so obscene...they spread it across the other two universes to keep it from being made again but now it seems it will come to that again. And they need to correct that mistake. Just a theory.

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wasabi_girl1 October 9 2010, 05:15:17 UTC
I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed it. :)

I definitely want to know what this implied yellow universe is all about. Having two universes is already so much awesome to deal with that I can't even imagine!

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ulkis October 9 2010, 23:47:04 UTC
I really enjoyed this.

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wasabi_girl1 October 10 2010, 00:55:22 UTC
Thank you!

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