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Cross the Country (Heechul/Siwon)

Aug 28, 2011 02:04

Cross the Country
Heechul/Siwon
~4500 words
PG

for faeen, help_japan ♥ This is disgustingly late, I am so sorry. Thank you for bidding, and I hope this is okay.

and thanks, Kim Heechul. You're going to be missed like no other. ;(((

( “It’s time,” the green pixie boy whispers urgently from the newly semi-defined sinew of Heechul’s left shoulder, “to grow fucking up.” )

sj: c: sungmin, sj: c: kyuhyun, sj: c: heechul, sj: p: heechul/siwon, sj: c: hankyung, fandom: super junior, sj: c: shindong, sj: bandfic, sj: p: heechul/kibum, sj: c: kibum, sj: c: donghae, sj: c: yesung, sj: c: leeteuk, sj: c: siwon, sj: c: ryeowook, sj: c: eunhyuk, sj: p: hankyung/heechul

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anonymous August 29 2011, 11:16:44 UTC

ughh this is so good I am so sad you don't plan on writing anymore ;________;

favorite lines

Do you ever veer away from this dull emotional neutral that you’ve built your life around? This speed bump-free flatline.

Only on a very bad day-the count of which seemed to be diminishing with time and, perhaps, wisdom. Thank God.

Efficiency, he learned later, had to do with more than just cars. You could be emotionally efficient and never waste a feeling on something that didn’t deserve to be felt for. There was energy conservation.

Heechul could be broken into different parts, one of which thrived in the darkest of dark corners, but Siwon was made whole. He needed light to survive.

And he pulled you in, and the water sealed you together, and you were a jar airtight, not breathing, because you couldn’t handle being kissed like this.

i just really like the way you phrase things:

Siwon was momentarily flattered by his trust before he remembered what was at stake. This was the approximate vocabulary his mind assumed that day: stiff, pragmatic.

Heechul’s mind didn’t come with handlebars. But Siwon was thinking in retrospect.

and that last paragraph. Just. All my tears tbh ;______; I have nothing intelligent to say, but I really loved this, especially for your insights on Siwon -- he's kind of a tough personality to nail down imo but your interpretation of him is very believable.

warmboys August 29 2011, 13:28:30 UTC

I will still/always be writing! maybe not for them, and maybe not fic, but that's a promise!

<333 Siwon really is tough ;; I recently watched them on Strong Heart and learned yet a whole other wealth of information about him I'd never known before. It's like, irl character development just never ends XDD;

thank you for reading! ♥

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